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Make Me Smile |
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Will DeVore Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 12Weddington, NC, USA |
(Dedicated to Kelfa Panew, my love and my life. And no, that's not her real name. *grins*) In your place you stand so tall Your noble chin stuck out so far Inside you are fair and just Deep in my heart I know this all too well Outwardly you are fair and just With my eyes I can easily see your kindness There are no masks which you don And no falsehoods mar your beautiful soul There is no place that I would rather be If by you I could spend all time and forever Then that would be all right with me You are the one that makes me smile 1/4/01 -= Will =- |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
sweet poem, totally emotional i loved it *dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*----Kyle Finn......2001 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nicely expressed, your poem is great Will  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was completely sweet will. very nice poem. I liked it a lot. The last line put the punch in it......great ending.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Sweet poem... the girl is lucky!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This was really sweet  Good job! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was such a nice poem. good dedication. she is luck this girl. Regina |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
sweet...she must mean a lot to you. Hope things are well. thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
beautfil post the ending concluded it very well great job best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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