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Get up and Go
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Get up and Go |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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Get up and go This time I have to say no I will not wait around to be hurt again Feelings or not, this time I’m certain The magic is there when you come around But your heart’s locked up, tied and bound You love him, but you love me too His love’s on the surface, you know mine is true You’re not emotionally ready for this, so you do what you do best Love ‘em and leave ‘em and forget all the rest I finally understand you mind’s too young Too filled with the boys, the parties, and all the fun You act grown up, but it only lasts for a minute If you’re not ready for a commitment, then don’t even begin it Cause once the smoke has cleared from your High School years And you begin to see through all those tears There I’ll stand, by your side And out will come the feelings that you tried so hard to hide I’ll continue to love you until you’re ready to know But since you’re not ready, for now, it’s time I get up and go "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
pretty good, really enjoyed reading it *dont let life push you around, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place* ---Kyle Finn....2001 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the way this is written, the poem is very good! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
THis was great because i can relate to this completely. Wonderful post keoni!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
This poem is good I really liked reading it. --Neo |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is very insightful and understanding. And well written too! Good work  |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
jon, well, that exaclty sounds like one of my ex's who was older than me, but he didnt say it as nicely ...loli can see what u wrote from my own experience it was really good REgina |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
You act grown up, but it only lasts for a minute If you’re not ready for a commitment, then don’t even begin it I love this poem... it is sooo true to what happens to soo many of us!! Great Job... I look forward to haring more... And I hope that everything looks up for you!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I enjoyed this poem. Be patient, she will grow up soon, just make sure that you are there, like you say you will be. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
you just gotta let things happen.. i enjoyed this read keep up this good writing best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this is a WONDERFUL poem. i truly love it!!! keep up the great writing... post some more! ~VALERIE~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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