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Good times and Bad! |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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No matter what happens between me and you, No matter how bad it feels, I hope you know ill always be with you, No one can change the way i feel, You are the one who makes love feel true, Good times are great, Bad times are worse, But in either of those, Ill always love you. Good times i like, Bad times i dont, But somehow you seem to make me no matter how bad it gets i always want you, Lisa you are my gf, Lisa you have read my poems, Lisa you have opend my heart, Lets not let the bad times get inside and tear it apart, Help me fight the bad times, So next time i write a poem it will only say goodtimes with the one i love. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Lucky lucky lucky... some of us are still searching for that special someone to set our hearts free. Be grateful that she is there. Although, reading this it is evident that you already are. ^_^ Very nice poem. Keep it up. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope she does help you through the bad times, because this poem shows that you are very happy with her and want things to last. I hope everything is going good. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice poem, I can tell you truly care. I hope that you can write a poem about: "goodtimes with the one i love." next time too. Good luck. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great expression Branden! Keep talking and sharing your thoughts with her ... that's one of the most cherished traits in a relationship ... hope things are continuing to be well!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well nice one here branden. I never showed my GF my poems. NEVER! I just came out of the closet. Yea, you heard me. I was an in-the-closet-poet. I just didn't care what people thought so I never showed people, let alone her considering my poems are usually inspired by her. Even if they have nothing to do with her, if their sad.....well SHE did it! I blame it all on her haha.... Yea well nice one here brande, may the good times roll and keep rollin'  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well thank you all and im so glad i got your reply's but the one that really got me was the last one. Dope, well im glad your an out-of-the-closet-poet now lol your poems are grreat and in enjoy reading them. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem here Brandan... hope everything goes well... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
wow!that poem was so full of emotion. it was really awesome! it seems you have found your love. good luck and i wish the s=best for u and her. its good u show her your poems.REgina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
braden my man, great thoughts of love here... im so happy to hear your so lucky you continue to still write with heart-felt words best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thank you guys so much and all i have to say is well, try to share your poems with the one's you love it works "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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