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Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

0 posted 2001-01-04 09:43 PM

Near or far
Where ever we are
We will stay strong
Our hearts belong

I love you and you love me
Soon we'll be together just wait and see

From under the sun
Two became one
We shall be together
Our hearts forever

I Love you, JL...

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2001-01-04 09:58 PM

sounds like you really like this person
great expresson
i hope things dont go wrong
best wishes

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-01-04 10:04 PM

Stephanya: I agree with JDR, it does sound like you really like this person. Nicely written and nice wording.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

3 posted 2001-01-04 10:29 PM

Nice poem. Good luck w/ this person. I hope it all works out

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

4 posted 2001-01-04 10:33 PM

Thanks again

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

5 posted 2001-01-04 10:40 PM

wonderful, absolutly wonderful

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-01-05 12:15 PM

aaah... did you ever consider working for hallmark? That's so priceless! ^_^
Great poem! Such a nice summary of your emotion.

Melster
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

7 posted 2001-01-05 12:23 PM

lol @ Allan... hallmark... good idea!!

This is a great peice of work, I can relate to this feeling as can a lot of others here too I guess!!

Melz!!

P.S. Good Luck!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-01-05 12:26 PM

Yeah, it sounds like things are really great for you, nice job on the poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-01-05 09:12 PM

Well i'm glad you feel very strongly about this long-distance relationship and love him greatly. I hope it all works out for you in the end.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

lilpoet
Member

since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

10 posted 2001-01-05 09:46 PM

This was a wonderful poem. It totally describes the love I have for this one guy. He lives really far, but I love him so much. Good poem.

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

11 posted 2001-01-05 11:42 PM

And it totally describes MY Love for this ONE guy, too

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

12 posted 2001-01-06 12:21 PM

This is so sweet! Great job! Keep it up

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

13 posted 2001-01-07 07:16 PM

seems like you are already satisfied in life

that's nice to hear. great and really sweet post. hope to see more poems from you in the future

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

14 posted 2001-01-09 02:03 AM

After four years of passing through jerks (no offense you guys in here), I knew someday
I'd find someone who is meant only for me. We both figure if we can survive a seperation that is against our will, we can survive anything.

*Love ya honey!

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

15 posted 2001-01-12 09:34 AM

Aww this was such a cute poem

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