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jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2001-01-03 11:52 PM

Uhm, well this is kinda gross, but kinda funny too! Im sorry for posting this, please forgive me. Don't take it seriously. Enjoy

"Bathroom Aroma"

I write these words
Upon my toilet bowl,
It’s coldness like swords,
Making me outta' control

A smell rises of foul,
And into the air,
As “things” come out my bowel,
I don’t think to care

I search for some cologne
To heal this smell,
From my buttocks it’s known,
As eyes begin to swell

I reach over to flush,
And down this disgust,
Out the bathroom I rush,
With one easy thrust

I'm in the clear,
To my room I meander
To rid me of despair,
And upon my bed I lander

J.D. Raulinaitis 1/3/01

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"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

[This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 01-04-2001).]

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

1 posted 2001-01-04 12:00 PM

lmao
That was uncalled for... but somehow funny

mikeykrazy
Junior Member

since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

2 posted 2001-01-04 12:10 PM

man that was just not right. but it was grate though. i like that you can turn something that is so discusting into some thing funny grate poem keep posting

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-04 12:35 PM

dude...........ew.....
dude...........EW!
DUDE!!!!!!!!!!
EWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2001-01-04 01:03 AM

You know, in a sick, disgusting, repulsive way, that actually cheered me up somehow. Maybe it helped me realise that there ARE people out there with more problems than I have. *LOL*

I needed that after the evening I had... NOT!!!

I agree with Dopey-

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
~*Rhonda

PS. That's just wrong. Some people's kids these days... hey my dad would like that...

"I am Canadian" - Joe
If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2001-01-04 01:03 AM

You know, in a sick, disgusting, repulsive way, that actually cheered me up somehow. Maybe it helped me realise that there ARE people out there with more problems than I have. *LOL*

I needed that after the evening I had... NOT!!!

I agree with Dopey-

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
~*Rhonda

PS. That's just wrong. Some people's kids these days... hey my dad would like that...

"I am Canadian" - Joe
If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-01-04 03:03 AM

TOTALLY GROSS.......but very creative.......
Not sure if those are the right word for it .......I never know what to expect to read next.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2001-01-04 01:11 PM

I love skyfire's response, and Dopeys. This is something that took a lot of guts to post, how repulsively entertaining

I think more people should post sick stuff like this

haha......

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

8 posted 2001-01-04 07:55 PM

Quite lovely there Jeremy yeeeeeeeeeeeah, *ahem* eww *ahem*
Bel

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

9 posted 2001-01-04 08:02 PM

DANG!!! that is nasty man!! LOL funny but still YUCK!!! *plugs her nose*
~*Justine*~

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

10 posted 2001-01-04 09:38 PM

ok....that was seriously some pretty nasty stuff....reminds me of how my bathroom smells after my dad goes in.....lol hahah
i laughed when i read it it was hilarous. seriously i agree with dopey on this
EWWWWWWWWWWWW......
Regina
ps great poem though

X_me_X
Junior Member

since 2000-08-18

Posts 37

11 posted 2001-01-04 09:45 PM

lol
that was funny
wow u must be really creative what else have u written about hehe im afraid to find out

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

12 posted 2001-01-04 10:16 PM

hahahaha, i feel so weird now... I cant believe I posted this...
...I cant believe I thought of this!!

thanks for not taking it seriously

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

13 posted 2001-01-04 10:29 PM

totally disgusting..but it brought a smile to my face

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

14 posted 2001-01-05 03:27 PM

I'm going to be different then everyone else in my opinion. I LOVE THIS!!!!!! LOL it takes balls to write this and congrats on a kick ass poem!!!

~*VALERIE*~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

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