UPDATE (funny, thats the title)

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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-01-03 04:37 PM

I'm BACK!!! hehe, and my first post back has jsut gotta be about muh baby

~*~ UPDATE ~*~
Three weeks ago,
We started having problems
We argued and I cried
I asked if it was really love
Or just a joke to you
“How could you say,
‘I don’t know’?”
After that was said
You held me
Trying to make things right
Yesterday, you took your ring
Off my thumb, and moved it
To my ring finger
“I guess we’re married now?”
You just smiled

Last night, On the phone
You said you’d been thinking
Which got me scared
That’s what they say
When they break my heart
You said you really loved me
And if you didn’t
We wouldn’t be together
You said you wanted
To be together a long tyme
I even heard the word “forever”

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~

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DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

1 posted 2001-01-03 05:11 PM

This is really sweet...I liked it. Good job

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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2 posted 2001-01-03 05:13 PM

You two sound quite happy. Good for you! Nice poem.

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-01-03 07:42 PM

aawww

that's so sweet!

~*Rhonda

"I am Canadian" - Joe
If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-03 07:42 PM

I'm happy for you tamma, but let me tell you something......take things SLOWWWWWW.....no need to rush into marriage or anything of the sort. People who rush into things liek that are just insecure about whether or not the relationship would last without that kind of a bond, this bond being marriage. Just take things slow is my advice.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-01-03 08:22 PM

i really agree with dopey! take it slow. marriage is a big thing.
great poem though
Regina

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

6 posted 2001-01-03 09:32 PM

Definitely take things very slow Tamma. The best relationships are those where you crawl along, learn more and more everyday, be honest and loving, and then when you're ready, finally get married. Well written poem, very sweet! The word 'forever' is a great thing to think about...

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

7 posted 2001-01-03 10:33 PM

aww.. this was sweet
seems like things are going great!!
best of luck

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-01-04 12:44 PM

Yeah, what they said

Sometimes you have to give people time to see how they feel. Nice job on the poem

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mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

9 posted 2001-01-04 01:02 PM

now i could say awww how sweet... and agree with every one else. but i don't really you don't have to take things solw take them at you pace and if you feel like you are being pressered to go faster then slow down to your pace. and loved the poem and i'm not shure if this is right but i also see some hert that you have to deal with. but if that is not right e-mail me thanks... and i'm defently going to put this into my library. keep up thoes poems and good luck with your boyfriend

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

10 posted 2001-01-04 03:00 PM

This was a really sweet poem

I am going to assume that the whole marriage thing was just a silly little humor deal... but as for the word "forver", call me a cynic, but there is rarely such a thing. However, it's still music to the ears

And I thought I was the only one who got scared at the words "I've been thinking"! Thank God I am not! I HATE hearing those words unless something GOOD comes after them *LOL* Well, I am glad to see you are happy! Good luck and good work

Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

11 posted 2001-01-05 02:08 PM

Thankx for the replies ya'll!! Things are going better than they were, if only I'd learn to quit listening to "other" people's comments. I heard a few weeks ago that we were gonna break up....hmm.... hasnt happned yet...guess we'll see.

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~

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GirlsBestFriend
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since 2000-12-27

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Planet Earth

12 posted 2001-01-05 03:04 PM

well written and sweet emotions! good luck to you both

lotsa luv

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Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

13 posted 2001-01-05 03:09 PM

Please don't let one simple mistake of words on his part ruin your relationship.
Good poem, a cute story. I wish you both the best of luck.

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