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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Your feelings churn Turning inside out Something is missing But you don't know what A big void Covers your heart Aching to be filled With an unknown substance You search for that something That's missing in your life Yearning to discover What it is your heart craves I know what your are searching for I know what you seek His name is so sweet to say It tastes like honey on my tounge Jesus, sweet Jesus! He can fill the void in your heart Just ask him to enter your life And your soul will be free ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This was a cool poem. Everyone needs Jesus in their life. And poetry. hehe ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
SCG~ Looks like you found what you have been looking for. God plays a big part in our life. Keep up the good work!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
scg, This one is great, I thought it was going to be just another love poem or something, but it turned out to be the ultimate love poem  (yeah, i know, that was kinda corny) Nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem a lot. I agree with everybody on this one......Magnifique!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wow!!! it's nice to know someone's faith is so strong. this is the kind of poem that everyone in passions should read  thanks for the uplifting words I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks everybody for the replies! It means much to me! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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