Teen Poetry #3 |
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In His Own Little World |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
In His Own Little World I wish there was a way For him to feel my pain To know everything I go through And thats its driving me insane. But no matter what I do He never understands He thinks kisses will make it better Or walking toegther holding hands. I need to have a talk with him About what he did to me But he's in his own little world Where all of this he doesnt see. He thinks everything is perfect And it'll always be this way But we're not like we used to be There's something I need to say. I think its to move on And let our two paths part 'Cause pretending everything's perfect Is beginning to break my heart. [This message has been edited by DreamerGrl27 (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i guess some guys never learn ...some dont realize what theyve done until you tell them try to talk to him and let him know how you feel good luck ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
First off, good poem...but make sure you have somewhere to go after you part! That's a danger you should prepare for...but anyway, good job on the poem!!! "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hon, I feel your pain. It's not gonna be easy, but if you're not totally happy with what's happening in this relationship, and you feel it's time to part, then it's time to part. 'But he's in his own little world Where all of this he doesnt see. He thinks everything is perfect And it'll always be this way' That got to me. Describes my situation perfectly a couple weeks ago. I hope it works out for you, whatever you choose to do. ![]() ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I liked it a lot. Hope things run smoothly. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Letting go is hard for guys as well as girls.. talk to him... it's the best thing to do!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
This was a really good poem, I hope everything works out between you and the person you wrote this about. --Neo |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Thanks for your replies guys...it really means a lot to me!!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Communication, communication, communication!! Tell him how you feel (if you haven't already). Give him time to react too, you have to be fair ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
If you truly feel this strongly that you must part with him, then my advice is to do as you feel that you must do. Just a nosy suggestion is all. ^_^ A nice poem, it is evident that a lot of emotion was put into it. Try not to be heartbroken afterwards, and maybe try talking with him about this before making any sudden decisions. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awwww hunnie!!!!This was a great poem (as always!!)...I think you should definately talk to him about it cuz we both know that he's pretty self-centered. I dont want to see him break your heart...or anyone for that matter but especially not him. Great poem hun...keep em comin! |
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