Teen Poetry #3 |
even though you duped my i love you anyway ( help me i need to tell her i still love |
mikeykrazy Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 37U.S.A |
my exgirlfirend is on the phone and i still love her poest some ideas for me to let her know that i still do thanks i'm talking to you now even though you dumped last year you keep asking me "why i'm i so dear to you" i think to my self and jsut sit and say "even though you duped my i love you anyway" you tell me i frogive you for what i'm not shure i know that you are true i look at pictures of you and me all thous time i rember that we were so happy i want to turn back time when we were still together but all i can do is give you this rhyme and hope for it to be better you listen to me when i give this to you all you say is that you like it i'm not shure if you know that what i'm saying is true all ican so is hope for you to rember thoes times all those poems and all thoes rhymes all thoes days all thoes times thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Mikey: Loves come, loves go. If you really want her that badly, just tell her straight out otherwise you will regret it. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Dear Mickey - Love is hard, I often think it is the hardest thing of life! You are really tring hard to get this girls love again, you are trying soo hard... All I can say at the moment is good luck and I hope you win her back... talk to me on ICQ or email me and I will try to help you more... it is hard in here - bit public if ya know what I mean!! Good Luck!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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mikeykrazy Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 37U.S.A |
AF: thanks for that i'll take you advic thanks MELZ: i do now think that love is the hardest thing in life. i'll talk to you thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"all ican so is hope for you to rember thoes times all those poems and all thoes rhymes all thoes days all thoes times" Love can be really complicated, and the only advice I can offer is to never hide anything from the one you love. I really like how you express yourself in this poem, especally in the quoted stanza. Thanks for sharing, and best of luck! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh... I do know a guy like you, it's so rare to find a guy with a love so undying. This may sound cliche... but if you feel that way tell her, or "you'll regret it, maybe not now, but soon, and for the rest of your life..." hehehe good luck... xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I been there dude and it's horrid......i hope things brighten up for you. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
you can keep loving her, but if she wants to go, let her... don't hang on too much... how does the saying go? Read my poem entitled "Bird"... might help you a little bit... hope i helped ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I think that if you really love her, you just have to tell her to her face. Just say "I love you" and see what happens. Love is so hard, especially in these kinds of situations...I really dont know what else to say. If she doesnt feel the same way about you anymore, that you cant really do anything. You cant make someone love you, no matter how badly you want them too, because I have been there. If you want to talk you can email me...I hope everything works out okay. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
brighten up keep searching for someone else dont get shadowed by her actions best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great poem MickeyC. If you want advise, I will tell you one thing from personal experience. Regret hurts far more than rejection. I say if you are completly honest with her and ture to your feelings everything will work out fine. Just don't hold anything back. Just my advise though Godd work Jason< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the ending of this poem, nice job on it and I hope things work out for you. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hmm... there is little advice that I can give you. Just keep smiling and being good friends with her. Love is only good when it works two ways. If she feels nothing for you, try to turn that around. Don't be too obvious. By the way, good poem. |
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mikeykrazy Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 37U.S.A |
) ) ) ) ) ) ) ) ) I HAVE GRATE NEWS ABOUT THE OUT COME OF THE POST. I TOLD HER THE WAY THAT I STILL FEEL AND SHE SAID THAT SHE STILL LOVES ME... SHE STILL LOVES MY... SHE STILL LOVES ME!!!!!!!!! WELL THANKS FOR ALL THE INFO ON WHAT I SHOULD DO AND I REALLY MEAN THAT THANK YOU ALL VARY MUCH. I FEEL LIKE THIS PLACE IS THE FAMILY THAT I NEVER GOT. AGIAN THANK YOU ALL VARY MUCH thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it. |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Im really happy to hear that everything worked out!! Good luck!! |
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