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The soul of Regina
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The soul of Regina |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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With her music blaring. The deftones and Godsmack ring through out the air. The spray cans littered across the covered hardwood floor. The dull shaking of the room from the bass of the music. The intoxiting smell of spray paint she had come to love. It was all that represented her. She felt safe while graffiting her room. Block, spray,block, spray, block over and over again a pattern , a rythm which she used so nothing would drip. What did she care, if her parents disapproved of her. Their archtectual digest house was so fake so impersonal. A prison. She needed to experess herself but her parents wouldnt ever let her do that, no.. she had to be fake, a phony just tlike them. The art of graffiti, swirls through her veins although she knows its only a matter of time before someone comes along with her mother and repaints her walls Standing in the middle of the room, noticing all her tags and designs,she feels proud this is her no matter what they say Nirvana starts to play "smells like teen spirit" that is exaclty what it is her spirit... REgina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
yes! free the rage! graffiti is a cool art to preform good luck in your work best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
We all have the need to express ourselves, and seems like there is always someone coming along with a can of paint to hide it. Great vibes from this one, Regina. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great regi......whatever makes you happy......as long as it's healthy and safe. Much love from me.......adios  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ina: I can totally feel what the emotion in this poem like it is looking into a mirror for me. Breaking free against things that appear right is sometimes only the way to truely free yourself. Fantastic Work. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Poem... here's someone who knows what they want to do and they are going to do it no matter who wants to tell them otherwise!! Good to see that you are being yourself!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thank you all for your replies. this was kinda what im alll about....sorta. well anyways thanks again. Regina |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Good poem.......  I have actually done something like this with an old freind. Thanks for sharing.....It brought back memories for me. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great thoughts here, I like the way this is done, it's really good! Just think, if they paint over it, you have another chance to leave you mark on the walls!< !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Graffiti is perhaps the most powerful form of art, because it is so universally disapproved of! People frown on it before even reading it, so only those truly deserving can even get the message! By the way, you have good taste in music! ^_^ |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice work. You can tell that YOU are truly behind this one. It shares your true feelings. Very impressive poem. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Jon-heysup! thats me Allan riverwood-thanks you like godsmack,deftones and nirvana?!Graffiti is frowned upon and your tottally right about understandign it. Lakewalker-thanks, always i get a reply makes me feel special Greeneyes-thanks for your reply Regina |
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