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Finger Fun (song)
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Finger Fun (song) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Finger Fun: Sweet x3 loving bliss. Sweet x3 the taste I miss. Sweet x3 in the sun. This is all a part of my finger fun. You x3 this is not why. You x3 concocked your lies. You x3 with a gun. This is all a part of my finger fun. We're wasting away into the river streams. We're losing our faith in all it seems. I can't believe this is happening to me. To me to me, you see? Sweet x3 loving bliss. Sweet x3 the taste I miss. Sweet x3 in the sun. This is all a part of my finger fun. We're straying from all our worth in life. We're delaying time to make you my wife. I can't believe this is happening to me x2 To me to me, don't you see?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Interesting... interesting!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Dopey: This one is definately different..Interesting though. I like it.  ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I agree with the others. Definately different! Love ya! Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Okay, this was definitly interesting. It was strange, however, I liked it. Nothing stale or boring from Dopey. heheBy the way why Finger Fun? Huh? That kinda confused me... Keep it up, man... xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
its was very different but awesome. finger fun....what a title! REgina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this is a song.....so it will be a bit different from all my poems. Anyway FINGER FUN....haha really wanna know what the song is about? haha......i'll give you a hint.... It's kinda sexual.....hahaha FINER...FUN...get it!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha ok bye! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
*Sighs and shakes head*Dopey Dopey Dopey, dear sick child....yeah it's quite interesting....funny.......lol Bel |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This song sounds good in my head. I think this works very well. I must say when I read the title I thought of what this poem is about but I didn't think it actually was going to be... lol Anyhow great job Jason< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow, your a sick b***erd! just kidding... great song.. i tried to play some guitar to it while singing... im sure it would sound better if i didnt... good poem! best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
My, oh, my. How... strangely amusing... 'We're delaying time to make you my wife.' How strangely sweet... sort of...Don't think I'm a person with my mind stuck in the gutter all the time, but I knew right away that this would be... interesting...  And I right away thought about what the song could be about. I'm going to go now. Bye!~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I guess I don't really have any reaction to this song. None that I'd post anyway I see you don't hate everyone's socks anymore. Have fun with your shadow  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i think im gonnaneed an mp3 on this  just kidding....love it DopesI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
This was really cool. I'm glad you replyed to my poem...and you're right I do get really impatient. It's just that I do think everyone in here would like this. Cause most people...when they have no where else to go, it's writing that they go to. And that's my favorite place to go. It shows everyone how creative one person can be and how much talent they have and thought. This was a good song though...I'm already trying to figure out what the humm to it is. Hummm...hum hum hum? Close? ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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