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Dancing Flame
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Dancing Flame |
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Will DeVore Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 12Weddington, NC, USA |
Dancing Flame Sitting so bright Where have you been And where will you go tonight? Dancing Flame You go out all day Stay until late at night Then come home as naïve as before Danging Flame When will you learn What life's about And how it all ends? Dancing Flame You never trust in others As much as they trust in you One day you'll hurt those whom you love Dancing Flame There's no end in sight For you who hath brought The destruction of your own soul Dancing Flame If given a second chance To take back your life Would you take it? 1/5/01 -= Will =- |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
thats very good  ) i really like it*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*----Kyle Finn......2001 |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very good read, Will, keep up the good work! *smiles* -Tier{Robin} |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, A very well done poem here, nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great......good job on this one. The dancing flame....i liked that.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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