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Spiritless Faerie |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I am but a spiritless faerie Dancing in your mind's eye Caught up in a web of your deceitful lies You loved me once But I can never remember when All I know is that you cast me out like an unforgivable sin Let me tell you something As I lie fast asleep I silently hold onto your heart And cry each time it misses a beat As I walk upon it with my tiny feet Can't you no longer feel me? Nor see me in your dreams Tell me why, why do you cast me out Like I'm just a nightmare Envading your dreams I'm just a spiritless faerie Now that you've left me And still will be Whenever you come back crawling upon your knees... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so sad......i hope things get better cuz this sad stuff is just horrible for me to read.......hope you get happy soon!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
the word here are beautiful, the meaning however is sad to see as Dopey said, hope things get better for you!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
got to agree with the previous peep's, sad but good words! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ceinwyn: As everyone has written already, this is a horrible thing to happen to someone. Things will look up though, life always does. The timing however is never how anyone wants. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I really liked this. It seems like something I might write...Things will get better for ya... ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree with the others, and nice job on this one  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sad and very well written work. I loved the faerie aspect...kind of shows our fragility, doesn't it? Anyway, wonderful poem! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
I liked this very much! It was CUTE and it was powerful NICE JOB |
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