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Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

0 posted 2001-01-01 01:07 AM

I don't know why it's happened,
I don't know why it's me,
I've been here once before,
But no one ever sees.

Suffering in silence,
Eating away inside,
Every day is a struggle,
Everyday I want to hide.

There's a place that I dream of,
Which takes away the pain,
And the only time I reach there,
Is when I've given up on day.

I wish that I could be there,
I wish that I was free,
To live the life that I desire,
So I'm able to be me.

*Jennifer

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

1 posted 2001-01-01 01:14 AM

It's sad that you feel this way... I wish there was something I could say to make things ok, but chances are, whatever I say won't help... My suggestion though, is go to this place more often and work out what is going on in your life and then figure out how you can be happy, I hope things work out for you soon!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

2 posted 2001-01-01 02:16 PM

dang Melz and I must be your only fans, the others dont know what they're missing! Keep you chin up and dont ever giveup on yourself k? Thats my advice..cause when you give up on yourself, you give up on everything.

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-01 04:36 PM

but your wrong DQ, Jennifer is quite the writer and she shows that in this one! This was cool, we all need that place to hide and relax!

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Virgil
Junior Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 43
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-01-01 04:43 PM

Hey, I'm a fan now...good poem, nice work!

"By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee."

"I AM CANADIAN!!"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-01-01 10:34 PM

This poem relates to me soooooooooooooooo much! I totally understand where it is your coming from and how you feel...even the place it is that you talk of. I hope things get better for you real soon. Keep up the great work..i loved this poem!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-01-02 12:09 PM

Wonderful poem........i liked it a lot. You are really great.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-01-02 08:06 PM

I just started reading your poems, and I'm very very very impressed. it just bothers me to see people hurting so much though. I hope you find your happiness

good luck

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-01-03 06:14 PM

I hope soon that you can live your last line: "So I'm able to be me." It's important to be yourself, your real self. Good job on the poem, and DQ needs to give us some more time to reply

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Neokrew
Member

since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

9 posted 2001-01-04 11:32 AM

Hey Jen,

DQ your so very wrong yes the people don't have any clue what they are missing out on but I am her #1 fan

hehe. I really like this poem its well written. If you ever need to talk I'm here ya know

Your bestist Friend

--Neo

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

10 posted 2001-01-04 11:40 AM

Hey, I'm new to the forum. Nice to meet all of you.
I understand how you feel, i often feel like i am most comfortable after i give up on things, myself. Struggle is a necessity to appreciating the results, you know. Well done.

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