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mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

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U.S.A

0 posted 2001-01-02 02:41 AM

a firend ship gomne rong that is what this is about and i'm sorry for all the sad poems just posting what i have right now. i'll start posting happy poems i a couple of days i just need to get rid of some of thease hope you like my poem

what would happen if i died
would the world even care
and when i'm in my coffen
would there be any disspaire
when i'm being layed to rest
the gardener will be the only one there
and after i'm gone i'll no longer be a curse
because when you said
"JET OUT OF MY LIFE, I WISH YOU WOULD GO IN A CORNNER AND DIE"
your wish came true
because on that night i truly died.

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-01-02 02:55 AM

mikeykrazy: Don't ever feel it an obligation to post "happy poems." You post exactly what you feel like!! This is a forum and people will respect you for what you write, happy or sad.

Now people would care if went away and died. As much as the world sucks for me right now, people can actually be compassionate people and there will be someone who will listen to you. This person obviously holds no sort of emotion in them. Hold your head high, OK.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Kit McCallum

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Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-01-02 07:05 AM

We don't mind sad poems at all MikeyCrazy ... and this is very sorrowful. We do however have guidelines against posting suicidal poems, however this does not condone or endorse that, so can remain.

It's disappointing to think that someone could make a statement like this to you, but unfortunately, out of anger or frustration, many regret what they say long after they realize it even came out. Keep the lines of communication open, and let them know how hurt you feel when they say something like that. Take care,

Best wishes,
/Kit

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-02 02:42 PM

well, it is sad but as long as it helps you, its in good taste
suicide is never the answer
you can always get help from friends or familiy
overall, i liked the contents in the poem
it sort of portrays a lonely scene in my head
best wishes,

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-02 04:18 PM

Very nice poem. I loved it.......written with thought and believe me i reAD it with thought. My girlfriend loved the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

5 posted 2001-01-02 04:32 PM

thanks for reading my poem and replying to it
this firend i have known her cince we were in preschool. and one day something happened. and she said that to me.

Kit: i still talk to her a little but we arn't that good of firends. Thanks for telling me about the no suicidal poems. but do you have a place where you can poset them because that is some of my best work??

and thank you all for the replys i'll keep posting

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

6 posted 2001-01-02 04:33 PM

thanks for reading my poem and replying to it
this firend i have known her cince we were in preschool. and one day something happened. and she said that to me.

Kit: i still talk to her a little but we arn't that good of firends. Thanks for telling me about the no suicidal poems. but do you have a place where you can poset them because that is some of my best work??

and thank you all for the replys i'll keep posting

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

7 posted 2001-01-02 05:48 PM

this is a great poem, and i must agree with AF- never feel obligated to post happy poems, poetry is(for me anyway, maybe not for everyone) theraputic.. if you write what you are feeling then it can make you feel better... and this is how you were feeling at the time. i am sorry you had to go through this

anyways, keep writing, you are very talented

~*Justine*~

Kit McCallum

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Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-01-02 09:11 PM

Hi Mikeycrazy. In answer to your question, we basically do not permit poetry that glorifies suicide, violence, or the harming of oneself or others in any of the forums.

We have members as young as 9 years old that utilize the forums and since we have a young audience, it would be irresponsible of us to condone postings that for example may show suicide as a valid choice to the members who may be influenced by it.

Many members explore the depths of sadness, and do post these poems. It is however when exploration crosses over to what could be deemed as graphically offensive or harmful to a "family audience" or exalts glorification of an irresponsible act that a poem may be pulled for review and discussion by the Moderators. Should this be the case, at the discretion of Passions Moderators, poetry deemed to go beyond these guidelines would be deleted, and the author would be notified.

If you have a poem you think may be questionable, please feel free to e-mail the poem to myself or another moderator first if you like. We don't wish to stifle creativity, merely ensure we maintain the "family audience standards" set by our host. I appreciate you asking these questions, and for understanding.

This is a wonderful group of poets, and you will find much encouragement here ... we hope you'll have a great time getting to know everyone!

Best wishes,
/Kit

DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

9 posted 2001-01-02 09:15 PM

I know exactly how you feel...I had the same thing happen to me about three years ago, and I thought I died inside too. But you dont, you'll get past it soon. And someone who says that to you isnt worthy of you anyway. I know what you mean about would the even care if you died...I think about that all the time, but honestly you shouldnt worry about that because I'm sure there are a lot of people who care about you. Hope everything's okay.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-01-03 05:36 PM

Wow this poem was sad. This is a horrible feeling and im shur many of us, including me, have felt it at one time in our life or another. I know we also basically all have the question floating in our mind every now and then that if we died, would we be missed? would n e one care? would n e 1 cry? and etc..its a completely normal feeling and question...but you'll get through this. I hope everything is ok with you...good poem...

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

11 posted 2001-01-03 05:59 PM

Sorry for the double post

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-03-2001).]

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

12 posted 2001-01-03 05:59 PM

This is a good poem. I'm sorry your friend said that and I hope you're ok

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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DYME
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

13 posted 2001-01-04 12:17 PM

SAY WHAT YOU FEEL AND HOW YOU FEEL IT. THE ONE THING THAT NO ONE CAN TAKE FROM YOU IS YOUR THOUGHTS. IF YOU FEEL THAT WAY, CONTINUE TO WRITE THAT WAY. IT'S BETTER YOU EXPRESS IT ON PAPER (IN THIS CASE ON THE SCREEN) THAN TO GO OUT AN DO SOMETHING THAT YOU WILL REGRET. BUT THE POEM WAS VERY STRONG AND DEEP. KEEP DOING IT YOUR WAY.

DYME

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

14 posted 2001-01-04 03:06 AM

VERY good poem....Truely gives a new meaning to the saying "Think before you speak"....I enjoyed this. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

15 posted 2001-01-04 12:24 PM

thankyou all for replying to my poem. i never expeted all of this thanks

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

16 posted 2001-01-05 06:45 PM

awesome!!! This is probably the best poem i've read today. i'm really loving it. Keep posting and keep your head up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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