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A New Years Wish (Senryu) |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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I thought everyone could use a senryu for the new year. Enjoy! "A New Years Wish" Hoping you were there To kiss at the strike of twelve That was my one wish Jeremy D. Raulinaitis 1/1/01 < !signature--> "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Happy New years to you jer......nice one. But just to let you know.......haiku's are about nature......this would be a senryu  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
dopey, yah i realized that after... my mistake thanks, happy new year! "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And a Happy New Year to you Jeremy ... lovely senryu!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Happy New Year from another person who was "kissless" at midnight! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Happy New Year jeremy, but you won't get any kisses from me Nice job on this senryu!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
happy new year. that was a really nice senryu.. Regina |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I loved this! It was my wish too...but it didnt come true =o( This was a great senryu for the new year! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Happy New Year to you too. This was very good, sometimes haikus and senryus are so full of meaning, and they seem to be the topic around here recently! Nice job. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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