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Shoe Box (for Justin)
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Shoe Box (for Justin) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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The letters I have that i'll never send, are all addressed to you. don't think there are just three or four, there's a whole shoe box full. I write you when I'm angry, mad, sad, and full of joy. I write you when I've been hurt, by another stupid boy. I write you when I'm confused, depressed or even scared, I never call you though, because you might not be there. this shoe box full of letters, ehists in every space, of ever corner in my house, a fear for me to face. this shoe box full of letters, that you'll never ever read, help me to get better, because each one's signed by me. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Juss a lil something for Jus. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
cool ideas, i really liked this. made me think about writing more letters! jeremy r "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
jeremy: thanks! gee, letter writing. write me one! LOL. anyways, thanks!  I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey allysa --- sup with you and nitsuj  I always thought all this time that you two were going really strong. Beautiful poem, obviously you have a lot of emotion you need to let go from inside. I'm sorry. Do me a favor, just send those letters to him. What's there to lose?I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Kool poem Girlie Catherine! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good poem, I don't really know what to say about it! how are you and justin these days?? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a kewl poem..i kinda do what you do but instead of writing letters i write poems but rarely ever show it to the person im writing it about...their such sacred and personal things to me...i cherish them no matter what brought on the mood to express the feelings put into the poem...i love each one...awesome poem.. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great work... I am the same... I do things like you have described so wonderfully here!! Good Job!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
you know........just cuz he might not be there doesn't mean you shouldn't call him. That's givin in too soon. "And if you're giving in Then you're giving up" - Smashing Pumpkins  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i agrees totaly with dopey....nice poem though.give him a call and send those letters. Regina |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I used to write letters too, but I stopped about a year ago. It made me feel so much better because I was getting all my feelings out and it was almost like I was telling him everything, but I really wasnt. It's hard to explain but you probably know what I mean. I would never send any of my letters either because they're so personal, but if you do decide to I hope everything works out. I really loved the poem! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks ya all! Justin and I are okay right now. He called me a few days ago and we talked for a little while, and usually when he has to get off the phone, he doesn't call back for two weeks, but he called back! But I was asleep. And I saw him the next day (Dec 31) and he's supposed to go to this party I'm going to on Sat, so we'll see what happens! :0) I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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