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Reunited ( A two sided poem)
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Reunited ( A two sided poem) |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
I saw him today I ran into her today It seemed like years It's been a few days He looked as great as always She looked ok I told him I didn't have a boyfriend I told her about this new girl I met I mentioned that I still missed him She missed me, that figures He said we could still be friends I hope that when I told her we could be friends that she didn't think we could be best friends We gave a hug of a new begining That's the last hug I'll ever give her I went home and dreamed about our new relationship I went over to my girlfriend's house *i wrote this about some guys being so insensitive* ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
im glad you said "some guys" being insensitive, cuz then you'd get a mouthful! Well, this is a cool style that is always a pleasure to read! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I really loved this one a lot! It really does show how different girls and guys think. Some guys are so insensitive, but then there are the sweet ones too. This was really creative, I loved reading it! |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
I did put "some" guys on there. I was just going to put guys...but then I thought. Some guys are really sweet. Sensitive guys are the best though. ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i love the way this is set up. you hit the the nail right on the head, SOME GUYS are like this. i guess this is the only kind i've been introduced to because i relate well. LOL great job, hopefully i can see more of this type! ~*VALERIE*~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem.....wonderful way of writing. *clears throat* ahem.... ------------> Sensitive Guy <-------------- !*~ME~*! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I love it. I know a couple guys like that (not many, but some). They're the ones who bring up the saying "men suck". That was great! ~*Skyfire "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the way this poem was written! Nice job, and lol at dopey  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Post, different to the usual in that you give both POV's, which gave it character... It is great to read something different!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
THIS POEM ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!! Omg this poem was soooooooooo cool! I love how you showed the different point of views from a guy and gurl. That is so amazing. I loved this poem!! KEEP IT UP!!! |
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