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What Happened Last Night? (part 1)
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What Happened Last Night? (part 1) |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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What happened last night? Did you party hard? I hope you did. I also hope there wasn't any other girls there. You and I both know what you're like When you get drunk. I don't know how I'd react if I found Out you cheated on me. You say you love me, but did that love Keep you from another girl? I trust you, but people do stupid things When they're drunk. Please don't lie to me, you know I'll find Out the truth if you do lie. Your brother will tell me if I ask him. He may lie to other girls, but he's afraid To lie to me. Does it sound like I don't trust you? Maybe I don't trust you when you're drunk. I don't know yet. Tell me the truth and I won't get mad. Even if you did cheat, I won't get angry. Hurt, yes, but not angry. I'll only get angry if you cheated and lie to me. I'm scared about losing you. I guess I'm still insecure in your love. Please just tell me the truth. I need to know. Don't lie. Just tell me. -01/01/2001 |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
great poem, i knwo exactly how you feel about people being different when they are drunk or under the influence of any other mind/behavior altering drug... i used to feel the same way with my ex boyfriend when he went out with friends and got high(i guess that is part of the reason he is my ex now)  it wasn;t an easy thing to go through constantly wondering if he was being faithful or not... i wish you the best fo luck with your guy and i really hope he is being good to you~*Justine*~ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was a great poem. You have to try and trust him. trust is the foundation of a relationship. and once its broken, you might never recover..i know it for a fact. good luck REgina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i understand your concern and you expressed it clearly if i were him, i certainly wouldnt lie! great poem, cant wait for the 2nd part! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is serious. I hope that he didn't cheat. Down with cheaters........DOWN I SAY! But hopefully he didn't and all is well. I pray for that.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I sure hope he didn't cheat on you. And being drunk is no excuse. Maybe the answer's in part 2, which i'm off to read right now! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I really hope that he didnt cheat on you. Just because he was drunk doesnt give him the right to hurt you...if he knows that he'll cheat on you while around other gurls if he's drunk than he should know well enough not to drink if he cares about hurting you. Im goin to read part 2...this was a great poem! |
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