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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2000-12-31 09:27 PM

With this key that I give to thee,
You can unlock the secrets of me.
What makes me tick is hard to know,
If you look, you'll find out though.
I'm not that complex, you just have to find,
The key for both my heart and mind.
One key it is, it works for both,
I now can't lie, you have my oath.
Guard it well, this key I give,
With my secrets hurt, I cannot live.

~*Skyfire

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-12-31 09:38 PM

This was a really good poem. A key to unlock your internal beauty. Hope whoever opens it up treats it with fragile care...

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DreamerGrl27
Member

since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

2 posted 2000-12-31 10:27 PM

I really like this one a lot...it was really original. Hopefully you gave the key to the right person and you wont get hurt. Good luck.

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

3 posted 2001-01-01 12:51 PM

Great work... lets hope they treat your sole with care!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-01-01 05:00 PM

Cute poem

Short and sweet is always nice. Great job!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

5 posted 2001-01-01 05:03 PM

good description and it was very cute!

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

6 posted 2001-01-01 06:11 PM

great poem

very cute

good luck with whomever you are giving the key to

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

7 posted 2001-01-02 12:14 PM

This is great poem. IT's wonderful that you have someone you can trust with the 'key' to your heart and mind.

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

8 posted 2001-01-02 01:00 PM

that person better not hurt u once u give it to that person...or else!!!lol...jk.
it was nice and short. i like it!
REgina

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-01-02 01:12 PM

Short and sweet. Good job. I enjoyed reading this.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-01-03 06:33 PM

oooooooohhhh....this is really sweet. lovin it a lot

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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