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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Silly me begging for affection craving attention Adoration of a thousand might equal a smaller black hole However no less empty Not a speck more fulfilled A man who smiles at me fondly may have other thoughts And it makes me no better Not a drop in the bucket not an inch gained far less possible, the foot. "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
A persons true thaughts may never be known. That's why it is so hard to trust. I hope that you will find something pure to fill your "bucket" Jason ps great poem "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you Jason. Yeah, it is hard to trust people out there, because even the best intentioned souls may hurt ya. However, it's people as kind as you, and many others around here, that make me believe maybe the species called "man" isn't all bad.  hehehexoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot jenn. Hope you don't get too frustrated with things.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is such a sadly common problem  perfectly worded, great work!~*Justine*~ |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I agree with you Jenn... i'm beginning to see that "man" isn't all that bad. especially when u can whip them LOL great poem once again |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Sounds to me like you have some major hurt in your life right now... you doing okay? It was an awesome poem as usual... if you ever want to talk, email me anytime, eh? ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks lots everyone!! Actually, this poem was more a realization poem. I have this thing where I need male attention, it totally sucks. If I can get it, I'm there. It's a horrible disrespectful self image to have. I just am trying to come to terms with it. Thanks for the concern, and the comments! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem, you have done a wonderful job here... keep up the great work!! And good Luck Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i think you've been meeting all these "boys". There is a difference between "boys" and "men". it is hard to find a real man and you may never even find one. But if you do, you'll know he'll treat you right. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great poem here i loved: "Silly me begging for affection craving attention" it showed a lot of understanding best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I read this twice, once after your second reply. Your thoughts showed a lot more clearly in it after I read the reply, I think you did a really good job of expressing your thoughts. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks to you all for your replies! Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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