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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Once so strong, now so unbelievably pliable. Once so sure, never been more uncertain. I miss being content underneath that veil of hidden chaos, the unknown was okay until it surfaced. A shock to see you for who you really are, who you became. And yet, undoubtedly, through all of this, the world continues to turn. "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
I love reading your poems whenever I come here, you are so talented. I must say, this one is one of my favorites of yours. This poem is awesome! I loved it! "And yet, undoubtedly, through all of this, the world continues to turn." This stanza is so true. Remember this! Take Care! *Jennifer |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Exelent work Jenn "the unknown was okay until it surfaced." That was a great verse Love your work keep em coming Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you both for your comments.  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIce one here jenn, i liked this a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
once again jenn, wonderful poem ~*Justine*~ |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
9 words jenn : I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!! hehehe nice job can't ya tell i love it?!Do not offer yourself to the world, let the world offer itself to you!! Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks to you all. Sometimes, things just start to suck, and writing is the best way to let it all out. This place is very theraputic. Luv you all. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Isn't it, though? Wow, that was great. Hope things work out soon... need to talk, just email me, kay? Keep writing! ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Work Jenn, we all love your work!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very true, very true...no matter what the world will still turn. Great job, i love the poem  keep writingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great to read another one I liked: "I miss being content underneath that veil of hidden chaos," it showed me a lot of details and a clear meaning best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is really good, thanks for sharing it with us  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
I really like this. Thanks for posting. "A shock to see you for who you really are, who you became." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes617 (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks guys... your replies mean everything! Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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