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Late for an Ideal |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: Odd Late for an Ideal: Blink, blink that's it. Time's up. Pack your clothes and go. Don't let the door hit you. We've all known you're too slow. Here's an apple buddy. Oh, just take the fridge instead. This is good for all of us. Insanity for the sane man's head. Turn the corner, then a right. Keep going until you see a sign. It says, "Turn back", But keep going, you'll be fine. Write us a postcard or two. Gifts are a good gesture you've known. Tut-tut you're late! Late for an ideal of stone.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was clever, i enjoyed reading this one dopey! thanks for the share. ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Well, Dopey, this was odd, you're right. Ummmm, it's definitly interesting, I certainly couldn't write stuff like this. One day I'm gonna read about you in a tabloid..."Famous Writer...." Anyway, this was good. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Jeremey is right. this is very clever. I thaught when I read "Insanity for the sane man's head." that was going to be my fav line but then the next verse was awsome. Very well done "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
A mi me gusta mucho! Indeed, twas much enjoyed! Dopeyesque as always. :.) Much love! < blows kiss > Vreni |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
your right, it was odd. but really good. have a happy new year. Regina |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Odd, but lovable!!  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was so "odd" that it made sense to me!!! HAHAHA but i'm just that way LOL I loved it... it's humorous!!great job ~Valerie~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Odd - yes, but briliant as such... great work... Love it!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Y'know, some of your poems would make kick butt hit songs. O-kthen..Yeh I loved it, like I always do. Much luv. ~Carly< !signature--> If I am another waste of everything you dreamed of, I will let you down...If I am only here to watch you as you suffer, I will let you down... [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 01-01-2001).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
DopeyDope: As usual your work is brilliant. This wasn't too odd..pretty freakin' good actually. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Things that make you go "hummmmmmm" This was very different. Good job. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Your poem was good, I liked the flow of it and how it was set up I am getting so bad about giving replies lately, I think I need a break!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
seems like im the only dumb one in here cause i'm the only one who needs an explanation...sorry Dopes...it's just that youre getting too deep for me. And i'm the type who would like to really know what the meaning is to what he reads  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Dopey, this was another really cool one. I don't think it was too weird. The obscure style makes it that much better. Jon |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
cute ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What this is about is like........it's this guy and he's being booted out of his home, his refuge in search of his false ideals. His ideals of stone...jagged, and just hard with nothing on the inside. No meaning, no noting. Just an ideal that he has, yet he thinks he can get it. So this dude who ownes the home boots him out. Gives him the directions to where he needs to go, and he's sent off. I could get into more detail, but that's the general bulk and a skim of the deep meaning. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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