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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
Where are you I can't take this anymore Thinking about you Has become a bore I need you here Instead of there I need you more I don't want to share True love's aren't soposed To be apart And each moment you're away There's a bruise on my heart I cry everynight you're gone My life without you Is like a sad love song Without an end I'll be waiting As long as forever This is just a test We're meant to be together ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Right on. I loved the ending (here I go again)! I'll be waiting As long as forever This is just a test We're meant to be together Love it, love it, love it! ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
It's awfully hard when you seperate from someone you care about. But sometimes it's written in the stars, and sometimes it's not. Heartfelt poetry, keep it up!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I liked this poem a lot...I agree with you that true loves shouldnt be apart, and I hope everything works out okay for you. The poem iss really well written and it has a lot of emotion in it. Great job! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem here......keep them rollin in!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good for you! Stay strong, always wait til you get what you want! Nice poem!  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I understand what your saying in this poem and i completely agree with it. I hope things get better between you and your love and you get what you want hun...Talk to ya soon and great poem! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
What a beautiful poem... Great poem... look forward to more!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
sorry to see what you're going thru right now, just keep your head up. I know it's easy to say but hard to do. Stay strong. thanks for sharing  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job of writing the poem and I hope things can work out. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
hmmm...this one caught my attention because it's simple (but I like most of the other's poems here). So nice, keep it up. I'm new here just like u and I see ppl comes here and they never wish to leave (right guys?  )lots of luv [This message has been edited by GirlsBestFriend (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
How sad...  . This is such a beautiful poem too. But when the heart breaks, its the most painful injury of all.**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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