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A Childs Plea ( everyone please read, important you will understand why) |
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Mandi Junior Member
since 2001-01-06
Posts 19Chicago |
Everyday I'l go to bed and I'll pray and bow my head. Then he'll take my gentle hand and guide me on my way. I can not run I can not hide for you see he'll always find. So I go on my way praying to God for one last day. And so this plea I finally make, but to him my life he'l take. For with him I always stay and he kills me in everyway. And so i pray for just one day that i can just be, but he doesent care and decides to tourchier me. I'm out for rent to anyone that wants me in their bed, and my daddy gets paid good money at least thats what he said. They can do whatever they want abuse, slap, rape, or molest. But my daddy tells me it's only for the best. So now everyday before I pray I ask God as I plea; PLEASE NO MORE TOURCHIER!!!! CAN'T YOU JUST TAKE ME? |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
All I can say is that I hope this is a piece of fiction in your case. It's sad that this happens to some children, but I know that Jesus hears their cries, and that He cries with them. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm going to give some risky advice, take it or leave it. Praying to an outer force can't solve your problems, ever. Jesus can shed all the tears in the world, and it won't help. Try "praying" to a material being, like a police officer or a teacher. They can help you in your situation. And for the sake of sanity, keep writing. ^_^ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Amazing poem. Amazing that I'm so caught up in my selfishness that I don't see these horrible things happening to people everywhere...Never stop praying, never stop.... inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes, I'm going to have to agree with Allan on the part of going up to a police man and whatnot. If you want to truly solve things....do so.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I can't say anything about this, it brings to much pain to my heart to think about it. I will just say the form of the poem was good... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Mandi dear, if this is true to life, I urge you strongly to speak to an adult that you can trust and confide in. Do you have a teacher, a counsellor, a member of the church, a close family member outside this situation that you can go to? We take the health and welfare of our members seriously. Please do e-mail me directly if I can help you talk through anything. Many hugs to you, and please let us know if you are OK. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
If this is really going on, you need to tell someone, as the others have said. I believe that God can help you, but you also need to help yourself. Please, respect yourself and tell someone that can help. You have written this very powerfully! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I certainly hope that this is fiction. If not, I would urge you to go to the police. I hate to say it but apears that god has failed you. You have to take things into your own hands and go to the police now. |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Very emotional poem...If this is true, I have to agree with the others that you should talk to the police or another adult, teacher... Steff |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Ouch... if this is real, you need to do what everyone else has already said. This can't go on. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Wow... this is really powerful Allen said everything I would have said. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
she'll always be remembered... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This has made me soooo mad And this is happening around my area? What kind of father would do and say such things  Please listen to what everyone else has pleaded for you to do.....please Im from the same are as you are and some other members are form the Chicago area too, if you need help to get out, just say so but please talk to a counselor or techer...please I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh wow. This is the first I really remember reading this. Father's like that belong in prison. Uck, I'm saddened, and disgusted. It makes me really mad that this could happen to anyone. She will definitly not be forgotten. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Good poem, but I'm completely disgusted with the topic, I sincerely hope this is fiction. All I can tell you, is even though it may seem completely impossible, never loose your faith, it may be the only thing you have left. Good luck, keep us posted Bel |
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