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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
The scars on me is all i see When i look at them the feelings rush back to me The pain, the hurt, the love the gain Is remembered over and over in refrain I cant let go of the past and let in the new I'm stuck in yesterday and will be stuck in tomorrow too i cant move on in my damaging life I know i should it just doesnt feel right To let go is to move on and to move on is to let go I cant let go if i have so many things from my past that show The scars will haunt me for forever from today I guess being stuck in the past is where i'll have to stay |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
This is really an amazing poem. The scars can remind you of the past, and it is hard to move on. But I guess all I can say is look toward the dawn with eyes of hope. After all, "tomorrow is another day." God Bless and Keep Smiling  Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Whether we bear our wounds on the inside or the outside Shugar ... we all carry them. When you are ready to move on ... wear your past with conviction, and use it as a reminder of how far you've truly come beyond that time. Many hugs to you, and happiness for a bright New Year .. Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hon... you okay? If you need to talk, I'm willing. Powerful poem, by the way. I really hope things get better for you... ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
we all have scars wether we realize it or not. we might only remeber them as we get older or we might remeber them now. they can be phiscal and mental. i hope all is well, email me if u need to talk. Regina |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
well great poem keep the writting and yes we all do have scars weather we realize it or not good poem. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww shuga  That sounded cute..tough tough tough. Im PRAYING that ure not really feeling this to this degree and you just elaborated with this poem. let me know k? cause im bout to get worried about you*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well hey, i hope this is not the case. You can move on.....you can.....just try and be positive.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is good writing. I hope you have the stength to learn from whatever scarred you, so that you can move past it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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