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To My Parents
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To My Parents |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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You were there when I was down and out, Appreciated it is, without a doubt. I wouldn't have made it if you weren't there, Your love saved me from death by a hair. You are my parents, you brought me here, To this world and held me near. You taught me what I need to know, As from your nest, I soon go. I know one day goodby we must say, I also know I'll see you again someday. For any goodbye is not the end, Just another road, with another bend. I love you so much, there's no way to describe, The feeling of loss when by your rules I don't abide. I love you so much, awesome parents you are, With past events, let's not our relationship mar. **To my parents, Gil & Donna Adolph. They helped me so much when I was dealing with depression a few weeks ago. 'I love you guys so much, and I couldn't have done it without you!' |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is touching. It's nice to see that you have such a strong relationship with your parents. Hope to see more from you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You should show this to them. I hope you already have. It's also nice once in a while to tell em how we really feal, even if they already know  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I agree with acire. Let them know how much it meant to you.I don't think any parents hear it enough. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
The flow was perfect in this poem. And it's really good that you have such a strong relationship with your parents because they are the ones who will always be there for you. |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
I would let them know that they are appreciated!  Catherine |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
everything about this poem was great! ~JDR < !signature--> "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That was a very touching poem keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful tribute to your parents Skyfire! No matter how many "bends" in the road ... family is what keeps us strong. You are so very fortunate to have this type of close relationship. I hope you were able to share this with them! Best wishes, /Kit |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a beautiful tribute to your parents...your very lucky to have such a strong relationship with them. Great poem..it was very sweet |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
Awww. This is really sweet. I know what you went threw. Been there, done that. Your parents are the most special people you'll ever have in your life. I liked this poem a lot. ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great work... your parents really love you I am sure!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
That's awesome that you can count on your parents! Great job of expressing this in your poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is really great. I wish I had this type of relationship w/ my parrents. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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