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Rose poems |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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ok, these are "reposts" from Teens #2 (this one was my first post) ~*~ The Rose I Wore ~*~ The rose I wore, Is still here. I forgot all about it, Until I looked through the memories of the past. You were always there, And whenever I would cry, In your arms is where I’d always be. The pain always seemed to disappear when I was with you, In your arms, and you in my thoughts. The rose I wore, It holds so many memories, More than I ever thought it could. As I hold it now, I know that I can count on you, To be there when I need you most. Has our friendship become more, You hold me, and I know, I belong here, In your arms. The rose I wore, Holds my thoughts of you. I lost myself, In the memories held by the rose I wore. (this one was written almost a year ago, for an old friend) ~*~ The Secret Behind the Black Rose ~*~ Theres a reason why I prefer a black rose to any other, Red represents romance, And pink is love, Why would I want a rose that represents something I don’t have? The vase has been empty since hes been gone, Not even a black rose has left its mark on it. Romance is gone, Love has left me to die. The black rose represents something I do have, A hidden love, that even he doesn’t know about. I've tried to give him signs, I even wore a pink rose to his party… www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I remember these, Tamma. They are just as great now as they were the first time around. It's good to see them again!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
these are great, especially the 2nd one, i enjoyed reading them. ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think these poems are good, thanks for reposting them for us newer people I liked the second one a lot too, but the first is good as well."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful poems........glad to have read some from your archive!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
really liked the second one!!  ~*Skyfire |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I really liked the second one a lot...I especially loved the twist at the ending about wearing a pink rose to his party...that was really cute. They were both good poems |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderfull Tamma....i don't think i dot to these in the last forum.. thanks for reposting  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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