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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
thanks for the fire idea child of the stars! *L* my lame attempt at a haiku The fire flickers now light dancing on the stone wall never to burn out |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pixie~ This is delightful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I don't know much about haiku, but in my opinion (uneducated as it is), this is a good one.  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow, this was a great one!! You are very welcome Keep the good stuff flowin!!~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, this is really good, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Although I do not know how to write Haiku's, I do knowquite a bit about them by all of what I've read, and this is a very good one! Great Job! Keep up the great work! Look forward to reading more. God Bless, - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
It's not lame, it's good! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow.....this was beautiful!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
thank you all soooo much for the replies once again thanks for taking the time to look at my stuff!! ~*Justine*~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Good work... nice poem, and great attempt at the Haiku... you are more talented than me as I can't work them out!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
thank you again acire!!  |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
its was great!everyone can write them expect for me!(stomp stomp) Regina |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Ina*~ i am sure you can write these things if i can!! i havent; been able to write another one since this though!! lol!! oh well! thank you for your reply!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow good imagery... ... in such a short piece love it... best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Teenie, Ooooh purdy!! *laughs as she remembers Paul's line she told you about* I like this *clicks print* very nice! -=Beanie=- [This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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