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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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~¤ Conformity ¤~ Each generation Seeking Identity Energy and freedom of Youth Torn apart by Confusion Trying to Define Self In terms Other than Those Before Yet we Always Seem to Drift back Into Old Ways Losing that Innocence Rebellion At the forge of Reality Broken by Conformity It's a wonder Anything New Ever evolves When so many Can only think of Fitting in "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yo. True, so true...wish it wasn't but it is...awesome poem..... ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent wording here, I like your message too, nice job  !!!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*slaps IsGona five* Amen mah brotha!! Anyway this is completely true, i agree with all of you. I fit in with everything you all say. Whatever you all say, i agree with.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Great poem! I truly agree. Although I catch myself buying into the conformist ways on occasion, I try to stay away. Awesome poem! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Carly~ I wish it wasn't true my self but that's life. huh? Lake Walker~ Thanks man. I love getting comments from you. Dopey~ *slaps you 5 back* Amen Keoni~ You obviously have a good taste for poetry. hehe  jk. Thank you though. It's much apreciated.IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
great poem i see so many people like that just roaming the halls at school all on their pathetic ways needless to say it really bothers me anyway, cool poem Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you sherm. glad you liked it. this is one of my favs as far as the message goes. Thanks again IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I love this! Style, wording, etc. And it's so completely true! Kudos.  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
funny how conformity or stereo typing just affects people's lives. thanks for the beautiful read. keep posting I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
ahh, pure brilliance i have to agree with you on this one look at my quote, nothing is worse than a fake person great post ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
How could I miss this? Awesome poem, Jason, as usual... keep it up ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
IsGona: Ohhh YES!! I can totally identify with this piece. I am sick to death of the same conformists I have to deal with everyday. Wouldn't it be nice if they could get a backbone and stand up for themselves... ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Most of us know this one well, it would be great if the world didn't conform to 3 or 4 images, but they do. People care too much about it... I am at the stage in my life where I don't want to fit in... I want to be different to everybody else... I want to be me, and I am, completely... I am different, strange and weird in my own little ways!! GREAT POEM!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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