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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I quit using my words of rythmn and rhyme So I just only bide all of this lonely time I quit putting my heart upon my sleeve So tired of always taking the lead No more words shall fall upon my fingertips Nor shall I ever expose my soul upon my lips I quit telling people of how I feel For they just rob me of my sanity, my life they do steal Not once have I found someone sweet and sincere As I have been So I quit, playing this game For I shall never win... |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Wow.. outstanding poem. I understand what you are saying. You expressed yourself so well! Keep posting! You seem very talented! *Jennifer |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This one is really cool. I agree totally. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was a very well written poem, I loved reading it. But please oh please, don't box yourself up like I've done. Although it may seem good at the time, hiding all your feelings is not the way to go... ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree with Carly, and your poem is written very well, I like how you've done it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I agree that we shouldn't box our feelings up, but sometimes it is the best thing to do... We need to think about things and ensure that letting our feelings out is the best thing... if it's not or you are unsure, keep them inside... at least until you understand them, but don't let yourself become withdrawn... make sure you always have someone there that knows how you feel, a really good friend! Hope all works out for you!! Don't EVER give up!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ceinwyn~ I must tell you that this is an amazing poem. You have such talent. And I am glad that I am able to read your work. Keep it up!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
I really felt this poem. Stay Tru |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was good but don't quit....just wait...you'll find somebody.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I'm sorry about everything that's going on, and I understand. Just dont give up! Everything will work out in the end. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm very impressed...very impressed. You know, you'll find him one of these days  keep your head upI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
not to worry you'll recover from this keep on strolling and searching... through these troubled days good luck ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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