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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
The Simple Things Waking up late to a beautiful sight Everything looks different all covered in white Going for a walk on the freshly fallen snow Knowing that it's freezing but still wanting to go Snowflakes falling like kisses from the sky These are the moments that money can't buy Holding hands while walking down the street That tingly feeling from your head to your feet Whispering softly even though no one's around Watching the snowflakes as they fall to the ground Playing with icicles that fell from the tree Making snow angels like you did when you were three Realizing that you're freezing & it's time to go in You can't feel you toes, your ears, or your chin Stepping inside from the cold dreary storm Cuddling by the fireplace to get cozy and warm Sipping hot coco with marshmallows on top Savoring the moment not wanting it to stop Changing into your pjs and turning off the light And just one more kiss to make everything right. [This message has been edited by DreamerGrl27 (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow. All I can say is wow  That is a good poem. |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Sorry I messed up the title guys! It's supposed to be "The Simple Things"...I typed 'i'm gon' by accident! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey hunnie!! LoL yea i was wondering what was up with the title..i'll explain how to fix it when i c ya tomorrow so dont worry...this was such an amazing beautiful poem..it brought tears to my eyes...you have a way of expressing images that i think is such an amazing talent...great poem...it took my breath away hun...xoxo muahz |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem, it reminds me of all the great times that I spend with the people closest to me!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
i loved this poem...it reminded me of when i was little..this is what a lot of kids did and used to do...nice job |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like this one, I know some of these images so well. Nice job on the poem!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Please reply guys!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Wonderful job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
 :BUMP |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Wow that was a good poem!! Keep up the good work! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
romantic... very beautfiul! I really enjoyed reading this one ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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