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Dreams Won't Last
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Dreams Won't Last |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
Whatever been said Tonight is mine So remember our past How things went fine First moment 'til last I'll be online Even reachin' my bed Me got no sign Holdin' yer pic Am I losing my brain? It's you melted me Got me madly yours Forget times when needed me Ain't we friends Won't me need you ever? Time's over now Prefer to go out with me? Contemplating I'm still same old me Life got different directions Got to go with the flow And forget your past PS. Dreams won't last! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first post. It's tough when a relationship ends, and you describe the feelings really well. I'll be looking for more of your work around here soon! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!! This was a great poem to enter into passions with...some dreams dont last but the ones that dont werent meant to...you'll get what u want someday hun....great poem and im sorry things had to work out like that for u. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Welcome! This is very interesting, different from the usual stuff, it's very good! Keep it up! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to Passions...yadda, yadda, yadda...you get the idea.  Great first post. P.S. Dreams can shatter, but all isn't lost until hope is forgotten. Live and let live. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Good job on your first post here. I hope you enjoy it here, post some more for us! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hihihi!! Welcome to our wonderful world of poetry!! This was a great poem. Thanks for posting, I'm awaiting more! ~Carly |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
welcome to passions...this was a wonderful first post..keep em coming... |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great first poems keep up the awsome work I will be looking for more of your poems. Lauren |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Work and welcome, I look forward to seeing more of your work... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Awesome poem Almost made me cry, which is a good thing right now. Welcome here. I'm new too, but this is about you, right? I'm babbling, so I'm gonna take off now...  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
¡Bienvenidos! Great poem, hope to see more soon, smile Bel |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
Thank you all: LoveBug, xShUgArHiGhx, Jenn (Jenn Cirrincione), Dark Enchantress, Lakewalker, Carly (Child of the Stars), kimmy, Lauren (TopGunLauren), Melz (Melster), Skyfire, Isabel Galaxia I'm really so happy by all this encouragement... (I think should believe in myself more!!) Sorry if I can't come and reply about nearly anything but I'll keep reading as much as I get the chance to do so... love |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions.......hope to see you reply and post more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Welcome to Passions!! Wonderful poem to start it out here. I would love to see more from you! And remember, people will reply to your poems, but return the favor too Awesome poem. Take care!*Jennifer |
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