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Im not leaving you (not so much a poem, but a promise)
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Im not leaving you (not so much a poem, but a promise) |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
Have you ever wondered what it takes to get inside someone? To gain their trust, get into their hearts? Talk about a lot of work! Is it even possible? Now see, i tried to reach you I tried to be there for you, make you understand But you just push me away And tell me that you cant be helped But now that brings up another problem I DONT BELIEVE YOU! See, the thing is, everyone CAN be helped You just have to want it If you dont want it, how are you suppose to get it? So do you want the help or not? Probably not....but to bad! Cause im gonna give it to you! I dont care if you try to push me away Doesnt matter if you wont talk to me Or if you hate me with a passion Cause im not leavin Im going to listen to everything you have to say Help you with your fears Try to take away the pain Or atleast make it a little better You started talking to me Now you cant run away You can deny wanting my help as much as you want But you know deep down, you need it You know you need me Someone to talk to Someone to be there Someone to listen to your every word And not only will I listen But i will act upon the stuff that i can I will do what it takes to get you through this I will make evertying better Sometime at night i sit up thinking about you About everything you have told me And the fact that now you try to push me away When you know this it the time you need me most Maybe you dont see it yet Or maybe you just dont understand it But i care for you And because i care, i will NOT leave you I am sorry if you dont want me here But in the long run, you'll need me It may bother you that i wont go away But you'll see...in the end, atleast you'll have someone, me Please, take me as i am Take me as i come to you Dont turn away from me Let me in, let me listen ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
this was a really well written poem..i liked it...good job... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
It really bites when they won't let ya listen, doesn't it? Way to promise a listening ear.. I loved it.. ~Carly |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Your dedication to this person is a very good thing for me to see. So many people don't care, it's nice that you do. I hope that whoever it is they let you try. Wonderful poem.  Live and let live. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
All you can do is be there, and be there, and be there! nice job on the poem, it's done well "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It definately sounds like your extremely dedicated to this person....they should appreciate what ur trying to do for them instead of pushing you away but sometimes people do that sometimes...great poem hun |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was touching......hope it all works out.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You know some would say that you are a perfect example of being a true friend. Some might even say that being a true friend, you should also realize when it's time to back down. Confusing isn't it? I say go for it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was really good...this person is very lucky to have you caring for them and trying to help them...I hope everything works out good. |
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