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I Tell Myself |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Here's another one for you guys... Tell me what you think... I Tell Myself I tell myself the love is gone, But in the same breath a little voice Whispers, 'It's still there.' I tell myself I don't miss you, But everyday, everywhere, I lood for you. I tell myself it wasn't meant to be, But in remembering how good it was, I find that very difficult to believe. I tell myself the love will come again, Yet at the same time, I wonder Whom you will be loving then. I tell myself it's over, But my heart refuses to accept that. I tell myself that no one Is worth this much pain, But then no one had ever given me So much love and happiness. I tell myself that life isn't so bad without you, Even as I wish you were In my life again. *Jennifer I'll explain why I wrote this poem. I was in a realtionship for 2 and a half years and it ended not too long ago. He was my confidante, and my best friend. It hasnt been easy... |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I'm sorry your relationship ended. I hate this feeling. I have learned to live with it and get over it in time. It's a hard thing to do. Jon |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Tears of Glass: Great poem. I liked how you said how you felt and wanted to feel together. This is a tough situation to be in. In time your heart will heal or mabye you will find this person later on down the path and you will reunite. You never know what the future holds, trust me I learned that the hard way! Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
this is exactly what i am going through right now...i understand how hard it is..over time..it wil hopefully get better...just keep looking for the better things to come..good poem.. |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Iam sorry to hear what you are going through, and I only pray that it will get better... the poem is very beautiful I felt the feeling with every line I read Keep it up |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this is a good poem and I hope you make it through these hard times looking forward to the good ones. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you know it's never easy to lose someone tha close to you. Denial is defenitely a part of it too. You tell yourself this, but at the same time you really feel the opposite. Good luck and i hope things change for the better for ya  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was good........i liked it but you know ive been through that......same time too.....2 and a half years........only diff. is that we're kinda on and off and that sucks for me........anyway good luck with stuff.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Your poem was amazing, but I'm sorry you had to write it and that it's true. All I can say is that it's not easy but you just have to keep trying, and you can't force yourself to get over someone or stop loving them, because that is controlled by your heart and you cant do anything about that. It takes a long time, and you'll probably never forget them or even stop loving them but eventually you'll move on. I really hope everything works out okay. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Sweetie, that poem is soo good! I know it's hard when you just get out of a long relationship... just don't keep your feelings inside. Write them out... You'll get through this, I promise you  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey, Nice poem blah blah I just said everything they said Keep posting and writting (BTW you know why I want to know on tuesday  -- Neo |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great work, a wonderful peice showing the hardships of letting go of something so dear and close to you... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
good work but hold the tears! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Silver Butterfly Junior Member
since 2001-03-13
Posts 42Between here and the end |
That was beautiful. I could feel the struggle in it. I really liked the line "yet at the same time I wonder, whom you will be loving then". That is the most powerful phrase in the poem. Awesome job. Ciao |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is a great poem loved it-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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