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Lost in Tears and Endless Fears (post #1000)
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Lost in Tears and Endless Fears (post #1000) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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Weightless body, empty soul, my mind drifts slowly, I'm not whole. Need you now, you're not here, filled with regrets, shown in my tear. Out of reality, thoughts so wrong, can't happen now, lost, not strong. I gave you up, emptied my soul, can't go on for I'm not whole. August 10, 2000 "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Wow!!! 1000 posts, huh? Geeze. Well, I really like this one and I feel special because I get to read it. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Great 1000th post Lakewalker! Congrats on hitting a big number...work yourself up to an even bigger number!  ~*~SCG~*~ |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
*bows and say's* Oh great #1000 poet, take me to ur leader...oops sorry  hehe. Great post LW."Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
CONGRATULATIONS!!!Cant wait to see more by you...You made it to a 1000!!!!     ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was nice lakewalker.....the ryhme scheme was dif and i did like it a lot. Keep up the good work.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 Congratulations on 1,000 Posts LakeWalker! What an excellent poem to mark this milestone. I liked your style and thoughts in this, very solemn, but well composed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you all so very much, your replies are greatly appreciated!!!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"I gave you up, emptied my soul, can't go on for I'm not whole." --Exellent ending here, Lakewalker, I can definitely relate. Very sad words here, but well done! And congrats on 1000 posts! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
My congrats to such a clever poet Your good too and you know it Keep it up and you will see How much we need your poetry Post number 1000 hit so early 'n soon And makes me write this very tune Good luck in future years to go And thanks for the respect you show Excellent post my friend, keep it up, loved the ryhme scheme and flow, an awesome style for a brilliant writer, loved it! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Alwye- thanks for the reply jeremy- thanks for the poem and for replying!!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, Lakewalker, this one's great, you should really be proud of it. Keep posting for us, ok?? (What a horrible cover for a bump ) < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
congratulations for your 1000th post though i know you're way past it now. I really can't saymuch but i do feel your pain. keep sharing my friend I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
thanks for the reply "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
*just bumping this up for ya!!!* E mail me, alright??? Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I did send a reply to the email you sent. have you gotten it? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This flowed mah-velously.  I like the short form used in it, made it read a lot easier. Great job. ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really love the flow as well.. hmm.. seems like you've come a long way since 1000, huh?  Nice job!--Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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