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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Envisioning the life we two once had So clear and vivid within thine eyes, Thinking of you seems to make me so sad Why are they so hard, all of these goodbyes? I can't get you out of my head at night Lying awake in my bed all alone, The vision so clear and yet still so bright Its hard to love a heart that's made of stone. Your heart wwas full of warmth, but now so cold Tomorrow will bring yeat another day, I wish I could have you with me to hold Always in my heart is where you will stay. But I've found another love with a heart And now I can begin right from the start. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Once again...moving. We've all been in your shoes. Just surprised I've known you for so long and still didn't know what a talented poettess you are. Find your muse again and stick with it. TAP2 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is another good poem...i like this one alot more though...im glad that you were able to move on and forget about the other guy...alot of people have been in your place...i know i have...but eventually i found someone else that actually showed me he cared...unlike the other one... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I like this poem! I'm glad to hear one of us has been able to leave the wraths of the unloving ex. I am still trapped. I just can't find it in my heart to move on. anywho, this was a wonderful poem and I hope to see lots more from you!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i still dream these thoughts. you express them so well here keep it up and i voted for it just to let you know I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Although I can tell that the memories still taunt you, there was a bit of optimism at the end of this poem...I sincerely hope that's a sign of happiness to come. By the way, thank you for joining the forum and for your kind words. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely poem BabyGirl1! It's so nice to see such a positive turnaround at the closing. Broken hearts are so often mended with the love of another. Beautiful sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit McCallum |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Thank you so much for welcoming me in to your ranks. I feel so at home here. Thanks for all of your replies and inspiration through the words that you write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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