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~Night_Mist~
Junior Member

since 2000-06-24

Posts 31
Calgary, AB Canada

0 posted 2000-07-02 05:50 PM

Blurring Ignorance

The endlessness continues.
The laughing mocks me of what I want to be.
Smiles are pitting me, showing me what I could be if I tried.
Pretending to know me.
To understand.
The influence has taken over.
I can't free myself of it, and what it's done to me.
Nothing has begun.
The nothingness won't end.
Fading out.
In.
It's infuriating me.
What I do to you, what you do to me.
What I do to myself.
Tears return, blurring my vision.
Blurring my consciousness, confirming my fears.
My depression.
My fears take hold, holding my back.
Back from you.
You surprised me because I surprised you.
Hating the love,
Loving the hate.
Loving the ignorance that we don't have,
The bliss we used to have,
What we could have if we gave equally.
If we only weren't so ignorant.

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

1 posted 2000-07-02 06:19 PM

To most that poem would seem confused. I personally like the jagged rythm and the message put forth. Understanding is very important.
TAP2

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2000-07-02 10:43 PM

That poem was really good, I liked it. If all isn't good now, it will get better. Keep up the writing!
Bel

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-07-03 12:58 PM

i voted for this one. enjoyed it much and i hope things get better for you and keep your head up love style here. and P.S my book is on its way.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

4 posted 2000-07-03 05:46 AM

It seems like you learned from the mistake you made. Hopefully you and the other are friends now. Your writing is admirable...keep us going.

jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-07-03 06:37 AM

Wow! Your thoughts are well expressed in this poem Night_Mist ... the flow is powerful! I hope you'll be able to find some answers within these questions

Beautifully penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-01 06:55 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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