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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
sometimes i wonder what my life would be like if i just ignored everybody around me and lived my own life. what would happen if i stopped caring so much about what my image looked like and lived my own life. Other times i wonder what my life will be like if i keep doing what's expected and live the planned life. what will happen when i start to care too much about what my image looks like and live the planned life. these two choices are ever present. these two choices make or break me. these two choices tear my world apart. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
wow..... |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I know how you feel, it is hard to be yourself in this world where everyone depends on you to do the things you have always done, when all you want to do is break that and get out and be ther REAL person you wnat to be! Eventually we have to break free and become the person we want to be, no matter what happens and what the consequences. People get hurt through this and will say " I want the 'old' you back" but what they have to realise is that the old you is sick of it and wants to do other things... break out, be yourself, othes will eventually get used to it and if they don't then they aren't worth it because they can't accept you for who you are! Hope everything works out for you!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You'll pull through bud...nice poem......keep posting. Your work is great.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
thanx everybody for your replies! melz: you really encouraged me...i needed that thanx! i hope everybody has a merry christmas and a happy new year! pharon |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, what Melz said  I heard that she's the advice queen  Nice job on the poem!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was an excellent poem...sometimes i wonder about these things too but you kinda just gotta let fate run its coarse....i liked this one a lot |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem everything it says is so true.Keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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