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pharon
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0 posted 2000-12-24 12:37 PM



sometimes i wonder what my life would be like
if i just ignored everybody around me
and lived my own life.

what would happen if i stopped caring so much
about what my image looked like
and lived my own life.

Other times i wonder what my life will be like
if i keep doing what's expected
and live the planned life.

what will happen when i start to care too much
about what my image looks like
and live the planned life.

these two choices are ever present.
these two choices make or break me.
these two choices tear my world apart.

© Copyright 2000 maria g robinson - All Rights Reserved
katherine
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1 posted 2000-12-24 12:56 PM


wow.....
Melster
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2 posted 2000-12-24 03:21 AM


I know how you feel, it is hard to be yourself in this world where everyone depends on you to do the things you have always done, when all you want to do is break that and get out and be ther REAL person you wnat to be!  Eventually we have to break free and become the person we want to be, no matter what happens and what the consequences.  People get hurt through this and will say " I want the 'old' you back" but what they have to realise is that the old you is sick of it and wants to do other things...  break out, be yourself, othes will eventually get used to it and if they don't then they aren't worth it because they can't accept you for who you are!  Hope everything works out for you!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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3 posted 2000-12-24 01:58 PM


You'll pull through bud...nice poem......keep posting. Your work is great.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


pharon
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alabama
4 posted 2000-12-24 08:46 PM


thanx everybody for your replies!  melz: you really encouraged me...i needed that thanx!  i hope everybody has a merry christmas and a happy new year!  

     pharon

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-12-26 11:12 PM


Yeah, what Melz said   I heard that she's the advice queen   Nice job on the poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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6 posted 2000-12-27 10:09 PM


This was an excellent poem...sometimes i wonder about these things too but you kinda just gotta let fate run its coarse....i liked this one a lot  
TopGunLauren
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7 posted 2000-12-27 10:36 PM


Great poem everything it says is so true.Keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

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