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A Glimmer
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A Glimmer |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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~*A Glimmer*~ A glimmer of hope Gleams inside Visions of the possible And gazing into your eyes Thoughts of the improbable Banished from my mind Echoes of their words And my fears are left behind I hope you find within The me few others know Decide you will remain And of the past let go Let me be your everything At least just let me try We have a chance, you see And this you can’t deny All of this I hope for us In us I do believe Love presents a chance For you and me to be |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey, this was really great. I loved the whole mood..I thought the last 2 lines were very well thought out. Keep writing, and good luck with the whole deal. ~Carly< !signature--> Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 12-02-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I hope the glimmer turns into a full fleged bright light!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I really liked this one! Great job  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked the last stanza of the poem a lot, and the whole thing was good. nice job of getting these feelings onto paper, or is that a keyboard? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
great poem!! theres a chance for everything! keep up the good work and ill be looking for more from you! good luck! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful poems. I agree with Slim, there's always hope so don't give up. keep writing and keep sharing. thanks for the beautiful read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
EXCELLENT work, I loved it, what more can I say... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, a glimmer of a chance of love...it's an exciting, but scary thing. Well thought out, I enjoyed this a lot! Keep up the great work! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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