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0 posted 2000-12-21 11:52 PM



I think it's time to say goodbye
To all the lonely nights i cried
To all the times i screamed your name
Wishing you could ease the pain
To all the times you held my hands
To all the times i tried to understand
To all the times you break my heart
And now my life you rip apart.

I think its time to say farewell
To all  those feelings in me you churned from hell
To all the times you said you cared
And the times my feelings you did not spare
To the memories that were once bound in gold
To all those promises to me you told
To the thought that for me you'd feel the same
To once realize my horrible pain

I think its time to say so long
To all  those things that in the past have gone wrong
To all the mistakes that we have made
And to all those memories we choose to save
To the times where on each others shoulders we cried
And to all the times that we have lied
To the denial that in the future someday
That me and you might go our seperate ways

I think its time i changed my mind
I dont want to leave these things behind
These are the things that make you and i true
These are the things that we went through
I dont want to let go of our memories and trust
And the question of whether it be love or lust
I realize now that this is our foundation
Of our friendship and its wonderful creation

© Copyright 2000 Michele - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-22 12:21 PM


This is a really tough decision to make. I'm glad that you went about it in such a mature matter. Best of luck!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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2 posted 2000-12-22 02:05 AM


"Things aren't what they seem
Makes no sense at all for me"- Placebo

Hope all works well!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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3 posted 2000-12-22 02:09 AM


hey babe!! This was awesome..i'll talk to you about it more later, cause i g2g! keep up the great work

*kiley


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

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4 posted 2000-12-22 12:15 PM


Thank you everyone for your replies!!  
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5 posted 2000-12-22 12:34 PM



  Hey. This was a really great poem, and a tough decision indeed...Like the others, I wish you luck.

  ~Carly

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6 posted 2000-12-22 08:00 PM


i  know what to say about it.... itwas very good. everything is gonna work out.
Regina

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7 posted 2000-12-22 08:28 PM


This is a very good poem. I'm sorry you must choose here... but in the end I hope it all works out!
xoxo
Jenn


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8 posted 2000-12-23 11:02 AM


Wow, this is a great poem, and a really hard decision to make.  Think it through.....and good luck  
Bel

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9 posted 2000-12-26 12:26 PM


I really love the way this is written, great job on it!

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10 posted 2000-12-27 05:03 PM


Great Poem, I am sorry I missed this and it got to page 3 before I could find it!!  I hope everything works out the way you want it to!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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11 posted 2000-12-27 05:26 PM


hey awesome poem..i really enjoyed it..i cant wait to read more..
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12 posted 2000-12-27 05:27 PM


hey awesome poem..i really enjoyed it..i cant wait to read more..
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13 posted 2000-12-27 10:30 PM


  That is a tough situation to deal with but you seemed to handle it well. Keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

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