Teen Poetry #3 |
I think it's time...? (Please Read guys!!) |
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I think it's time to say goodbye To all the lonely nights i cried To all the times i screamed your name Wishing you could ease the pain To all the times you held my hands To all the times i tried to understand To all the times you break my heart And now my life you rip apart. I think its time to say farewell To all those feelings in me you churned from hell To all the times you said you cared And the times my feelings you did not spare To the memories that were once bound in gold To all those promises to me you told To the thought that for me you'd feel the same To once realize my horrible pain I think its time to say so long To all those things that in the past have gone wrong To all the mistakes that we have made And to all those memories we choose to save To the times where on each others shoulders we cried And to all the times that we have lied To the denial that in the future someday That me and you might go our seperate ways I think its time i changed my mind I dont want to leave these things behind These are the things that make you and i true These are the things that we went through I dont want to let go of our memories and trust And the question of whether it be love or lust I realize now that this is our foundation Of our friendship and its wonderful creation |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really tough decision to make. I'm glad that you went about it in such a mature matter. Best of luck! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
"Things aren't what they seem Makes no sense at all for me"- Placebo Hope all works well! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey babe!! This was awesome..i'll talk to you about it more later, cause i g2g! keep up the great work *kiley ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you everyone for your replies!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was a really great poem, and a tough decision indeed...Like the others, I wish you luck. ~Carly |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i know what to say about it.... itwas very good. everything is gonna work out. Regina |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is a very good poem. I'm sorry you must choose here... but in the end I hope it all works out! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, this is a great poem, and a really hard decision to make. Think it through.....and good luck Bel |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really love the way this is written, great job on it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Poem, I am sorry I missed this and it got to page 3 before I could find it!! I hope everything works out the way you want it to!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
hey awesome poem..i really enjoyed it..i cant wait to read more.. |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
hey awesome poem..i really enjoyed it..i cant wait to read more.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That is a tough situation to deal with but you seemed to handle it well. Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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