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What to Do (please help me) |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Go on or stay, I ponder Should I wait any longer Time, you say you desire I give you what you require Wait patiently, I will My life stands still Uncertainty, with in me I just want to see Feelings, not to be shown Together, but alone Outcome, so doubtful Why am I frightful Eating at me, the wait Its like you’re in another state Way from me, you are Like a distant star Old times, I long for Wanting what I had before Disappearing, it appears And appear my fears *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i think this reminds me of what i do alot when im down in the dumps.beautifully experesed powerful emotions! Regina |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
aww man can i relate to this one...i feel like this right now and its the most annoying feeling...i hope things get better for you and everything works out..great poem hun |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
This is a really powerful poem!! it's awesome, it's one of those poems you read and just go wow! hope everything works out! Katherine |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
thanx people...i too hope that everything works out. My g.f decided to take time off from a relationship, which i said was breaking up, but she said it wasnt ...AHH...girls are so confusing...!!! *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
That is so true...girls are confusing. I'm a girl and I still don't really understand them. We're an odd bunch, we are. Your g.f. probably doesn't want to loose you but she wants some room to breathe. Maybe she's not ready for a real romance. Maybe she feels like you're crowding her. Who knows. But just stick with it and one way or another it'll work out for the better of you both. By the way, excellent poem. You crafted your words well.  Angel< !signature--> In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was a nice poem. I liked it.....keep up the posting.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Awesome poem.. and it's so true!! Keep posting.. I would love to read more from you. *Jennifer |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like the way you wrote this, and I hope that things work out best for you! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
nice expression, i hope things come together. jeremy r "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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