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Allergic to Love
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Allergic to Love |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Your disposition is far more than just nasty. Angry words are carelessly tossed about hoping for anyone to hear. You keep yourself isolated, cutoff from the sun. That explains your pale skin, I conclude. Some have tried, to no avail, to make you happy, to make you their own, All you gave in return was a frustrated rejection for reasons unknown even to you. Your thick skinned. So much so, that your unable to feel the simple sensation of a friend grasping your resentful hands. You have grown old and lonley, Although you know I've always been close by. Bitterness and hate will surely follow like scars from forgotten battles fought long ago. You will eventually be alone, completely alone. But you won't mind, you'll have you, your angry thoughts, and your thick skin to keep you company. What is it you have to answer? But to answer you have to ask? And to ask you have to speak? And to speak you have to know, The answer. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's really sad to know people like this. You describe all of it so well. Thanks for sharing! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is a really good poem. Sorry you had to deal w/ such a person IsGona |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Sad poem, and Iam sorry you had to deal with all that heartache...  remember smile |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was sad...i sensed some bitterness within the poem.........good job  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I don't know anyone like this, but I am sure that it is hard for you!!! great poem though!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really love the way this poem is written, you did a great job on it. It's very descriptive and the title was great! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
title caught my eye, then the words fulfilled my expectations, great one! jeremy r "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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