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A Year |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Daddy it's been a year How can I deal with it I'm so sad, I really don't know who I am You were my leader and I loved you I cryed with you and I laughed with you We'd have so much fun and you taught me so many things Now I think about you and never will I forget you. I'm walking more dad I'm enjoing my social life with my new meds I'm laughing more and when I'm around friends we laugh I think about you always your on my mind 24/7 you never leave I may cry cause I miss you but I'm fine after Everyone misses you I miss you the most you were like me You had a ilness, so don't I We had a great friendship You were a great dad I hope your happy where ever you are Merry Christmas & Happy New Year Dad! With Love, ~*~Minna~*~ |
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David Generous Junior Member
since 2000-12-15
Posts 13 |
Hi Minna, I really like the poem, its Nice. I was kinda teary eyed reading it.. Love Dave |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow......a lot of feeling in this one. A pleasure to have read this.....i loved it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Thank you, yes it was hard to write this but I wanted to remember him..  A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is so sad!! katherine |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Your dad like mine is always there with you minna, he never leaves you, he loves you more than anything in the world and I am sure that he wishes he was here too... Christmas is the hardest time of year though, but you I know will always treasure the good times you have shared and rmemeber them to share with others one day who also knew him. I however can;t do that... remember him and keep him forever in your heart, just like me! Love Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Dave, Dopy_Dope, katherin, Melster, thank your for you replys. Today the whole family is letting off a ballon that says "We love you dad". This poem inculded on it the ballon place took my poem copyed it pasted it on it! So it will go into heaven today and he'll see it, and love it. Merry Christmas everyone, may joyce come to everyone! ~*~Minna~*~ A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope you made it through this tough time alright. Your poem was truly well done, I think I can say for sure that your dad appreciates it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was very tough I bet, you did a wonderful and courageous job! jeremy r "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna --- are you intentionally trying to make me cry with your poems?  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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