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Never Again (please read) |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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I'm not really sure where the title came from, but I'm open to sugestion on a new one. Please tell me what you think. Thanx! Luv, Priscilla < !signature-->Never Again I thought you were my friend, but I know now I’m wrong Now that you’re gone I finally know where I belong You never cared, You were hardly ever there You never understood me, You left me in despair But now you are trying to ruin my life the things you say are like stabbing me with a knife I can’t sink to your level, I can’t be that low I am a better person than that, I hope you know I know what you told him, You know it’s not true All the lies & rumors, they were spread by you You turned your back on me, You left me without a clue, But now I know my big mistake was trusting you ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very veracious, friends can hurt, great rhyme here, it flowed ever so nicely jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
This is a good poem - true friends are hard to find but once you truely find a good friend you have found a treasure! Don't let this person ruin your life - they will one day wake up and realise that they can't do this to people! Good poem and the title works well - I hope to see more soon!! Melz!! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
I can’t sink to your level, I can’t be that low I am a better person than that, I hope you know It hurts right now but at least you know that you're much better than that. Great read. apsara |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
OMG I know what you are going through!!! That beep beep beep will eventually relize what she gave up and then she will be the one in pain so don't worry!!! I love the poem! It is one of ur best! Flows well and it has a great rhythm! Love ur bestest friend in the world!!! ~~~Spiffany~~~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sorry to see what you're goin thru  Nobody deserves to be stabbed in the back, specially from a friend. Seem slike you do have a food friend in sweetypie. You two seems so close. So, forget about the other one and stay with your true friends  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Wonderful flow and ryhme. Sorry about the situation tho!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this poem was really awesome. good luck with it all. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I was going to quote the same part apsara did! Nice job on this poem and I hope you don't have too many friends that turn on you like this. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Great poem the expression and description of what happened was very life like...Iam sorry for what happened despite that keep your chin up do on to others as they would to you. P.S. What they do to you will always come back to them 3 times harder Great Job |
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mikeykrazy Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 37U.S.A |
i'm speechless this was grate!!!! you did grate with your ryme. qustion do you refine your poems much? grate read and hope things get better! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
well...it was great. not a great situation. keep em' coming Regina |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is an awful situation and im sorry this had to happen to you...it was a great poem |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I'd like to start off by telling you your poem was awsome. Even though I have hundreds of friends I trust maybe 5 of them and even those 5 don't know everything. If you trust people they will end up screwing you over I see it happen everyday. Most people have to learn the hard way that's what happened to me. So now I know better then to tell people stuff. But anyway keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
good poem, guys don't know what on earth they are doing. they can be jerks but then they want you back you'll be fine. PG A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
I'M BACK!!!! scary huh??? < !signature-->Thanx for the replies everyone!!! Sweetypie~ I know I have a real friend in you...and i can't say that about many people these days!!! And to everyone else....thanx for takin time out to read/reply to my poem!! It was appreciated!!! Much Love, Priscilla oh yeah...Merry Christmas to everyone!!! ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-24-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know... I completely feel where you are coming from! Friends are so fickle sometimes! I wish we could put them through a scanner, and check em out before we start a friendship... but, hey, what kind of life would that be?? Good luck! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Sounds like this person needs a good slap in the face if you ask me! Have you ever confronted him/her about how you feel? I cant imagine how you managed to become friends with someone like that in the first place! Nice poem. You are so beautiful!!! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Sometimes people say hurtful things in confusion and resentment...maybe this person was just trying to protect their own heart. Too often people walk over others trying to protect themselves...anyways, love this...but dont close off yourself to this person...they may come around overly advising and analytical as always, kev |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Two big thumbs up for you sweetstuff!!! Its good that you got rid of this so called "friend" you had. I know what its like to have friends like that I've had a few. But good work!!! Sorry it took me so long to reply. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
thanx eagle and kevin!! Your replies wer appreciated! And ERIN, its ok, at least you replied. But I think we all have those friends who just really weren't meant to be our friends. some of us just take longer to realize it than others. I wish I hadn't taken so long. Luv Always, ~*~Priscilla~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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