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TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-12-23 12:49 PM

I know the heavens cried for you
Weeping tears like rain
But no amount of tears
Could wash away this pain
I know now that you are an angel
Sent here to me
God answered all my prayers by showing all your beauty to me
I felt your beautiful dark eyes watching over me
At times when I felt alone
And if you had a choice
I know you'd of stayed with me
But no goodbye's
Your heart is always with me
I hope you take a piece of me with you.

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2000-12-23 10:18 AM

This is such a sad and touching piece. I'm so sorry that you lost someone you love, but, like you said, it isn't goodbye! This is a beautiful tribute to them. Thank you for sharing with us.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2000-12-23 09:10 PM

This is such a beautiful poem...and a beautiful tribute to who you lost...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-12-24 01:57 PM

Nice work here.....keep it up.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-12-25 10:39 PM

I thought that this was very good. It made me cry a bit(maybe that can be blamed on my very weak emotional state at the moment) anyways, great job..

~Carly

WhY
ShOuLd I
Be hypnotized by someone else's lies
WhY
ShOuLd I
Take time and pride in what someone else believes...

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

5 posted 2000-12-25 10:49 PM

suck a rich peom full of sincere words and great imagery

jeremy r

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

6 posted 2000-12-26 12:41 PM

I thank everyone who has replied it means a lot to me in such a time.

HAPPY HOLIDAY TO ALL AT PASSIONS

Thank You All

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

7 posted 2000-12-26 01:18 AM

Oh this is soo beautiful...It will be going in my library!!! Keep it up!!!

Happy Holidays to you too!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

8 posted 2000-12-26 01:19 AM

Sorry somehow I forgot to add this to my library.

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Melster
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

9 posted 2000-12-26 02:21 AM

Great poem! Losing someone you love is hard, but you have writen this tribute well and I am sure they know how you feel!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

10 posted 2000-12-26 04:48 PM

I'm sorry I didn't see this the first time around. This is a very sad and touching poem. I'm sorry for your loss, and I hope things only get better from here. Awesome job, though...

*Jennifer

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

11 posted 2000-12-27 10:08 AM

I once again wish everyone HAPPY HOLIDAYS + HAPPY NEW YEAR which will soon be on coming

And I thank all of you for all the wonderful feedback

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

12 posted 2000-12-27 03:30 PM

Good job on the poem, and happy holidays and happy new year to you too

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

13 posted 2001-01-01 05:14 PM

beautifully written, though it's so sad to see someone in hurt

Keep sharing and thanks for the beautiful read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

14 posted 2001-01-01 05:18 PM

this was a very powerful heartfelt piece. GREAT work! keep it up!
~*Pixie~

DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

15 posted 2001-01-01 05:39 PM

This was a really nice tribute to the person that you lost...I'm sorry that this happened to you and I hope you're okay.

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

16 posted 2001-01-01 06:03 PM

nice work! cant wait to read more

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

17 posted 2001-01-02 12:34 PM

Death sucks, eh? Sorry you lost someone you care for. If you need a listening ear, drop me an email, kay? Awesome tribute!

~*Skyfire

"I am Canadian" - Joe
If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph

mikeykrazy
Junior Member

since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

18 posted 2001-01-02 12:55 PM

all i can say is i loved the poem dan sorry about the loss i know that it can be hard to lose someone, just remembaer this people come and go from your life but never for no reason

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