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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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(CAUTION: disgustingly mushy... where do I come up with this crap? Oh wait... nevermind... LOL) Sparkling, enchanting eyes Of a strange and wonderful hue Just one look and my gaze is fixed I can’t take my eyes off you Your smile makes me melt Our happiness does not subside I could spend hour upon hour with you And be happy just to be by your side Your kisses take my breath away Butterflies flutter within, I tremble with bliss The world in frozen motion around us There’s nothing better than this… When you hold me in your arms I feel so safe and protected The warmth and comfort take me over My feelings can’t be described or projected… |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah... I love "mushy" poems, and this one's a keeper! Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
awwwwwwww....that was sweet. is this for any particular person?;p Regina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes regina, it's for me. Isn't is obvious this girl loves me? DUH! hehe good poem! *blushes* im flattered...  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Yes, Regina, this is for a special person *LOL* but he won't see it for a while, if ever! Bad experiences with poem-giving... I have learned not to wear my heart on my sleeve. Not too soon anyways! Ah heck, I can't lie! It's for Javier!! I LOVE U! *LOL* Hey Javier how about you try actually TALKING to me on ICQ sometime hun!  Thanx for your replies everyone! You are gonna be seeing a lot of crap like this in the future. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
There is nothing wrong with being mushy!! I thought this poem was great and it described how you feel about him very well! Excellent poem! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Nice job on this one, mushy can be very good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Not much I can say that everyone else hasn't except great job, though they havve said that too!! Oh well... Mushy is good... Melz!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I f I were you, i'd give this to the person you wrote it for. If i was the guy and i read this poem, I'd melt  thanks for the share, and please right more mushy poemsI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
BEANIE!! ~*Teenie*~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
hey i liked this one a lot babe, great job! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
nice *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
My mouth is hanging open. Wow!!!!!! One of the best I've read all night! I don't know what to say! I wish I could get all mushy like that! Has your signifigant other read this? If not, SHOW IT TO HIM!!! I'm dead serious! Wow. ~*Skyfire "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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