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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Why, I hate you? Yes I believe I did for a while I hated all the fiber of your soul rather lack there of; After the anger consumed my brain and idle heart I realized the truth honest, abrasive, stinging I put too much faith in you I always needed far too much; You may be a deceitful, miserable man But I fell fell for it fell for you just toppled over backwards; If you are so terrible I am far worse I believed that sparkle in your eye was meant for me meant to be more; Therefore I do not hate you, yet I dislike you still I wish to get over my foolishness, my stubborn nature, however, denies me such. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem Hate is a very strong subject keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I've fallen for the same thing many times, hon. I know how you are feeling, but you seem to be a strong person, and you'll get through it! Best of luck. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem was great. Raw emotion at its best! Great piece here jenn.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Wow... I really like this one. Not that I don't love all your poems but this one seemed to really speak to me. Keep up the good work Jason.... hehe now you know my real name "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Well, Jason....  Thank you for saying so.Just knowing you like my work, it really keeps me waking up in the morning! hehehe just kidding, I luv ya man! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this one is really good, nice job on it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm in the same situation right now. I think I hate someone so bad at the same time I know when I see her again, I'd just fall down on my knees. Hope it doesn't happen that way with me, but you never know. All I can say is i guess we have to follow what is right for us. Thanks for the read  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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