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You Turned Away from Me
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You Turned Away from Me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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A best friend, I thought. But who are you now? You see, before, we never really fought, It may be time for our final bow. We were a team, Only a facade, I see. Because now you mean, So much less to me. You turned away from me. Suppose it goes to show, Might as well just set me free, For your heart left me long ago. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Its so sad when things change between you and your friends..but i guess that you 2 were meant to grow apart...everything happens for a reason i guess...Great poem hun "Its the greatest thing when 2 strangers become the bestest of friends..but its one of the saddest things when the bestest of friends become complete strangers" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sad poem considering you and your friend are growing far apart from one another. I hope all is well and luck flies your way.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Friends... only the strongest of strongest friendships last... Even those that you think are strong, often drift apart... It doesn't mean they are any less of a friend, it just means that you have grown up and moved on!! GREAT poem and good luck!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you all for your replies. I suppose only time will tell if this friendship may last. Thanks again.  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~ I am sorry to hear what is going on. Me & my best friend stopped talking for a couple of months. It was horrible I had no one to turn to but myself. I wish you the best and hope things turn out for the best. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It sounds like you want things to work out, so I hope they do. Great job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Nice poem Jenn. I hope every thing works out for you. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
true friendship is more than hanging out, liking the same things, doing the same stuff, gossiping about people, etc, etc, etc.... being true friends is thinking about the other one's happiness too. If this is a true firendship, it will show, and you 2 will sort things out. good luck I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i really liked this one jenn! keep it up. ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
It's so sad to hear about two friends growing apart...but sometimes you have to. And maybe you'll be better off with out her, you never know what will happen. I hope everything works out okay. I loved the poem. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you everyone, your replies mean a lot. Erin~ Sorry to hear about your friend, thanks for the support! Lake~ Yes, I wish for no conflict. My goal was always to fix things, and move on. But it is possible that I have grown past her, we're different now. Thanks. Isgona~ My man, you know I always love to hear from you, thank you very much! Acire~ You are 100% correct, I know. Thank you for you reply. Jeremy~ Thank you lots! Dreamer~ It is sad, I may have to be without a friend I've known for a long time, sometimes though, this stuff happens. Thank you.< !signature--> "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
This is a sad poem. I'm sorry that you and your friend are drifting so much. Like you said, time will tell, but in the mean time, I wish you lots of luck, and I jope things only work out for the best. *Jennifer |
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