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Essencesofdreams
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0 posted 2000-12-30 03:18 AM


Every person Is a blank canvas waiting to be
brought to life. The artist is yourself,You
wonder if you should go with the obvious or
go with the strange one? should you go with
the good or the bad? Would adding a little
pazazz mess everything else up? would painting
yourself diffrent from everyone else be such
a horrible thing? Everyone Paints them self
with mistakes, even if they like to or not
Mistakes are the only things makeing you
unique and special.


        
  I dont know why i wrote this or if it even makes sence but some how in my mind it does.EnjoyÜ




"Life Without dreams is no life at all"

© Copyright 2000 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-12-30 11:40 AM


It certainly makes sense Essenceofdreams ... and what a wonderful thought, being our own artist ... each stroke of the brush can change the whole presentation, I really enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-12-30 12:16 PM


I thought it was great. Maybe it's not the mistakes that makes us different and unique, but the slightly different strokes of the brush. Not a mistake, just an alteration.
nice one.



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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-12-30 05:35 PM


Yeah this one makes sense, and you did a good job on it

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Skyfire
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4 posted 2000-12-30 07:41 PM


I like it a lot! Wow. That's soooo cool! I never thought about it like that before! Way to go!

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Ina
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5 posted 2000-12-30 10:07 PM


i understood this, i do alot of painting and everytime i lift the brush or spray can to the canvas or the walls of my base ment. it represent my life....ummm..ok whatever.
regina

those who love us,will always love us.those who hate us,may g-d turn their hearts,if he cant may he turn their ankles so we can see them by their limp

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6 posted 2000-12-31 12:48 PM


Wow...this poem was great...its a really interesting way of looking at ourselfes. I liked this poem a loT!!
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