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Essencesofdreams New Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 4 |
Every person Is a blank canvas waiting to be brought to life. The artist is yourself,You wonder if you should go with the obvious or go with the strange one? should you go with the good or the bad? Would adding a little pazazz mess everything else up? would painting yourself diffrent from everyone else be such a horrible thing? Everyone Paints them self with mistakes, even if they like to or not Mistakes are the only things makeing you unique and special. I dont know why i wrote this or if it even makes sence but some how in my mind it does.EnjoyÜ "Life Without dreams is no life at all" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It certainly makes sense Essenceofdreams ... and what a wonderful thought, being our own artist ... each stroke of the brush can change the whole presentation, I really enjoyed this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought it was great. Maybe it's not the mistakes that makes us different and unique, but the slightly different strokes of the brush. Not a mistake, just an alteration. nice one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah this one makes sense, and you did a good job on it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like it a lot! Wow. That's soooo cool! I never thought about it like that before! Way to go!  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i understood this, i do alot of painting and everytime i lift the brush or spray can to the canvas or the walls of my base ment. it represent my life....ummm..ok whatever. regina those who love us,will always love us.those who hate us,may g-d turn their hearts,if he cant may he turn their ankles so we can see them by their limp |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow...this poem was great...its a really interesting way of looking at ourselfes. I liked this poem a loT!! |
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